Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a talent for memorizing things, so I can recite books very quickly.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Last week I'm very busy so I have got my father's birthday.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I think the most important things. That I need to remember in my daily life is my study tasks.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually make A to do things that ensure I don't forget any. Sings or deadlines. This way I can manage my time in the reduce stress.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然,建议使用更地道的表达方式,并避免重复。可以增加具体例子来支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can quickly remember important points from books I read, which helps me in my studies.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清楚。建议用完整句子回答问题,并具体说明忘记了什么以及原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, last week I was very busy and unfortunately I forgot my father's birthday, which made me feel really bad.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答结构不清晰,句子不完整。建议直接回答问题并用连词连接句子,提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, the most important things I need to remember are my study tasks because they help me stay on track with my learning goals.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误,句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达方法,并用连接词使内容连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually make a to-do list to ensure I don't forget any important tasks or deadlines. This helps me manage my time effectively and reduce stress.
× Last week I'm very busy so I have got my father's birthday.
✓ Last week I was very busy so I forgot my father's birthday.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情,应该使用过去时态。'I'm'是现在时,'have got'用法不当,应该用过去时的'forgot'表示忘记。建议将句子改为过去时态,符合时间背景。
× I think the most important things. That I need to remember in my daily life is my study tasks.
✓ I think the most important thing that I need to remember in my daily life is my study tasks.
原句断句不完整,导致句子结构错误。'things'应为单数'thing'以匹配后文单数谓语。建议合并句子,保持主谓一致,句子完整通顺。
× I usually make A to do things that ensure I don't forget any. Sings or deadlines.
✓ I usually make a to-do list to ensure I don't forget any signs or deadlines.
'A to do things'表达不准确,缺少名词,应该是'a to-do list'。'Sings'拼写错误,应为'signs'。建议使用正确的短语和拼写,使句子表达清晰。
× This way I can manage my time in the reduce stress.
✓ This way I can manage my time and reduce stress.
'in the reduce stress'结构错误,'reduce'是动词,不应与介词'in the'连用。建议改为并列结构,表达更自然。