Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so, because sometimes I will forget to finish, Tester was asked by other people. So I often prefer to take down notes on paper to help me remember things.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Actually, yes. One day when I'm going to attended an important meeting. I suddenly realized that I forgot to bought brought my metro card with me when I get to the station so it makes me late.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Because I showed her the cleaning duties in my class, so I often need to remember the schedule of my own class so I know when to clean the classroom.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I tried to take down notes on paper to help me remember important things. For example, when teacher asked me to meet him in the afternoon, I will take a note on a. Little paper and put it on my table so next time I saw it I will go to meet my teacher.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且有语法错误,表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,使用更准确的词汇表达记忆能力和记笔记的习惯。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget tasks. Therefore, I usually write notes on paper to help me remember important information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,时态错误较多,表达不连贯。建议使用正确的时态,简洁地描述事件经过,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, once I was going to attend an important meeting, but I realized at the station that I had forgotten my metro card, which made me late.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,句子结构不完整,表达含糊。建议直接回答问题,说明需要记住的具体内容,并用连接词丰富细节。
Ví dụ: I need to remember the cleaning schedule for my class because I am responsible for cleaning duties. This helps me know exactly when I should clean the classroom.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达较为清楚,但有语法错误和用词不当。建议使用正确的时态和更自然的表达方式,同时注意句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: I usually write notes on paper to remember important things. For example, if my teacher asks me to meet him in the afternoon, I write it down and put the note on my desk so I won't forget.
× I forgot to bought brought my metro card with me when I get to the station so it makes me late.
✓ I forgot to bring my metro card with me when I got to the station so it made me late.
这里的错误是动词形式使用错误。'forgot to bought brought' 应该使用动词原形 'bring',因为 'forgot to' 后面接动词原形。'get' 和 'makes' 也应改为过去式 'got' 和 'made',因为描述的是过去发生的事情。
× One day when I'm going to attended an important meeting.
✓ One day when I was going to attend an important meeting.
这里时态错误,'I'm going to attended' 中 'attended' 是过去式,应该用动词原形 'attend',且 'I'm' 应该用过去式 'I was',因为描述的是过去的情景。
× I often prefer to take down notes on paper to help me remember things.
✓ I often prefer to take notes on paper to help me remember things.
短语 'take down notes' 不常用,正确表达是 'take notes',表示记笔记。
× I will take a note on a. Little paper and put it on my table so next time I saw it I will go to meet my teacher.
✓ I will take a note on a little piece of paper and put it on my table so next time I see it I will go to meet my teacher.
'a. Little paper' 应改为 'a little piece of paper',更符合英语表达习惯。'saw' 应改为现在时 'see',因为后文是将来时,时态应保持一致。
× Because I showed her the cleaning duties in my class, so I often need to remember the schedule of my own class so I know when to clean the classroom.
✓ Because I showed her the cleaning duties in my class, I often need to remember the schedule of my own class so I know when to clean the classroom.
句中 'Because' 和 'so' 连用造成重复,应去掉 'so',使句子结构更正确。