Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I am good at murmuring things. I always. Trying to memory scenes at the same time in I can. Repeat them. Correctly.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I once. Forgot to send a very important e-mail during the work because. I try to send to the e-mail before I finished my duty, but unfortunately I totally forgot it.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I have to remember my routine work. On a daily basis for example, I need do some. Grooming checks. Anxiety. Daily basis also I have.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
If it is very important, I need to write it down to my To Do List and I check it whenever I finish it in after and before I finish my duties I have to double check it.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在发音错误(如“murmuring”应为“memorising”),句子结构混乱,表达不连贯。建议练习正确发音和句子结构,确保回答简洁且逻辑清晰。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I often try to remember scenes or details by repeating them in my mind, which helps me recall them accurately.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中断断续续,语法错误较多,表达不流畅。建议练习连贯表达,使用完整句子,并适当使用连接词使内容更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to send a very important email at work. I had planned to send it before finishing my duties, but unfortunately, I completely forgot to do so.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不完整且不连贯,缺乏具体细节。建议组织语言,使用完整句子,并具体说明需要记住的事项。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my routine tasks, such as performing grooming checks and managing my anxiety through regular exercises.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: If something is very important, I write it down on my To-Do List. I check the list before and after finishing my tasks to make sure I don't forget anything.
× Yes, I am good at murmuring things.
✓ Yes, I am good at memorising things.
学生将'memorising'错误地写成了'murmuring',这两个词意思不同,前者是记忆,后者是低声嘟囔。应使用正确单词以表达意思。
× I always. Trying to memory scenes at the same time in I can. Repeat them. Correctly.
✓ I am always trying to memorise scenes at the same time so that I can repeat them correctly.
原句断句错误,缺少主语和谓语的完整结构,导致句子不通顺。应将分散的短句合并成完整句子。
× Yes, I once. Forgot to send a very important e-mail during the work because.
✓ Yes, I once forgot to send a very important e-mail during work because...
句中断句错误,且'forgot'为过去式,后面应接完整句子。'during the work'中'the'不必要,应为'during work'。
× I try to send to the e-mail before I finished my duty, but unfortunately I totally forgot it.
✓ I tried to send the e-mail before I finished my duty, but unfortunately I totally forgot it.
'try to send to the e-mail'中'to'多余,应去掉。动词时态应与上下文一致,改为过去式'tried'。
× I have to remember my routine work. On a daily basis for example, I need do some. Grooming checks. Anxiety. Daily basis also I have.
✓ I have to remember my routine work. For example, on a daily basis, I need to do some grooming checks. I also have anxiety on a daily basis.
句子断句不当,缺少动词'to do','Anxiety'单独出现无谓,应补充完整句子。
× If it is very important, I need to write it down to my To Do List and I check it whenever I finish it in after and before I finish my duties I have to double check it.
✓ If it is very important, I need to write it down in my To Do List and I check it whenever I finish it. Before and after I finish my duties, I have to double check it.
句子过长且结构混乱,缺少标点符号,'write it down to'应为'write it down in',应拆分成两个句子以增强可读性。