Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more clear and organized. Use simple linking words like 'especially' and avoid repetition. Also, correct small grammar mistakes such as 'specially' to 'especially' and 'memorizing' spelling. Keep your sentences concise and avoid unnecessary words.

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things, especially numbers. For example, I find it difficult to remember years and dates in history lessons.

Gợi ý: Focus on making your answer more fluent and clear. Avoid repeating words and try to use linking words like 'but' and 'when' properly. Also, correct grammar mistakes and organize your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten an important thing before. It was the password to my bank account, which I rarely use. When I needed to deposit money, I couldn't remember the password and felt lost.

Gợi ý: Try to use complete sentences and correct grammar, such as 'spend time efficiently' and 'organize things'. Use linking words like 'and' to connect ideas smoothly. Be specific about what you need to remember and why.

Ví dụ: For me, it is important to remember to spend time efficiently and organize things well. This helps me keep track of everything and manage my life more easily.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure and clarity. Explain your method clearly using correct grammar and linking words. For example, say 'I use a trick called active recall. I write things down and review them later to remember better.'

Ví dụ: I usually use a trick called active recall. If something is important, I write it down and try to remember it. Later, I review my notes to help me remember better.

× No I'm not really good at memorizing things, specially numbers.

✓ No, I'm not really good at memorizing things, especially numbers.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'especially' when emphasizing a particular case or example.

× especially if it's about the year and the date after in history lesson the eyes I find it so difficult.

✓ especially if it's about the year and the date in history lessons; I find it so difficult.

The phrase 'after in history lesson the eyes' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'in history lessons' to indicate the subject, and the sentence should be restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I have and that is a password to my bank account.

✓ Yes, I have, and that was the password to my bank account.

The sentence lacks clarity and proper tense consistency. 'That is' should be 'that was' to match the past event, and a comma is needed before 'and' to separate clauses.

× I'm like, I have I have a money bank account.

✓ I mean, I have a bank account.

The phrase 'I'm like' is informal and redundant here, and 'money bank account' is incorrect; 'bank account' suffices.

× To use an I forgot one that I barely use, but when I needed to deposit the money from it I find myself lost and don't know what the password was.

✓ I forgot the password to one that I barely use, but when I needed to deposit money into it, I found myself lost and didn't know what the password was.

Prepositions 'to' and 'into' are needed to indicate possession and direction. Also, tense consistency requires 'found' and 'didn't' for past events.

× I think it is important to remember to spend times. Efficiently and also at organizing thing and keep track of everything 'cause it's really important to improve our life and the way we live to help managing it easier.

✓ I think it is important to remember to spend time efficiently and also to organize things and keep track of everything because it's really important to improve our lives and the way we live to help manage it more easily.

'Times' should be 'time' as an uncountable noun here; 'thing' should be plural 'things'; 'at organizing' should be 'to organize'; 'cause' should be 'because'; 'life' should be plural 'lives'; 'help managing' should be 'help manage'; and 'easier' should be 'more easily' as an adverb.

× I usually do 1 trick is called active recall is when.

✓ I usually use one trick called active recall, which is when...

The phrase is incomplete and awkward. 'Do 1 trick is called' is incorrect; it should be 'use one trick called'. Also, 'is when' should be connected properly.

× If it truly important I would just wrote it down and then try to remember it again and after that I will look bad at it and like about a bigger later I would.

✓ If it is truly important, I would just write it down and then try to remember it again. After that, I will look back at it, and after a longer time, I would...

'Wrote' is past tense but should be base form 'write' after 'would'; 'look bad' should be 'look back'; 'like about a bigger later' is unclear and corrected to 'after a longer time'; tense consistency and sentence clarity are improved.

× I'm try to revise it again.

✓ I try to revise it again.

'I'm try' is incorrect; it should be 'I try' or 'I'm trying' depending on intended meaning. Here, 'I try' fits better with the context.