Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, không quá dài và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: I used to think I had a good memory, but now I realize I often forget small but important things. For example, I sometimes lose my keys or forget simple tasks during the day.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng thiếu sự liên kết và hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things many times, especially related to my work and studies. Even though I write them down, I sometimes miss them because I am very busy and stressed.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, có cấu trúc rõ ràng và nội dung phù hợp. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và mở rộng thêm một chút chi tiết để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: I need to remember my daily work schedule because as a freelancer, I have to organize my time carefully. This helps me complete tasks on time and stay motivated throughout the day.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I used to write important things on my laptop, but it didn't work well. So now, I write them down on paper, which helps me remember better.

× I used to think that hours a person with really nice memory that now is not the case animal.

✓ I used to think that I was a person with a really nice memory, but now that is not the case.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure. It seems to mix unrelated words and ideas, making it unclear. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by properly structuring the sentence and removing irrelevant words.

× I am in fact I am more absentminded an I usually forget some trivial things and trivial task, but which are still important for my day and.

✓ In fact, I am more absentminded and I usually forget some trivial things and trivial tasks, which are still important for my day.

The original sentence has repeated phrases and incorrect conjunctions. 'An' should be 'and', and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'things'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly and needs to be completed properly.

× Even worse, I erfe lose my keys.

✓ Even worse, I often lose my keys.

The word 'erfe' is a typo or incorrect word. It should be 'often' to express frequency. The sentence is corrected to make sense and be grammatically correct.

× I have a got turn a lot of things not trivial.

✓ I have forgotten a lot of things that are not trivial.

The phrase 'I have a got turn' is incorrect. It should be 'I have forgotten'. Also, 'not trivial' should be 'that are not trivial' to clarify the meaning.

× They were related to my work and study, even when I've already written them down on paper.

✓ They were related to my work and study, even though I had already written them down on paper.

The original sentence mixes tenses and uses 'even when' incorrectly. 'Even though' is the correct conjunction here, and past perfect 'had already written' fits better with the past context.

× This usually happens because I am very busy at work, I don't have enough time to.

✓ This usually happens because I am very busy at work and don't have enough time.

The original sentence is incomplete and has a comma splice. The correction connects the clauses properly and completes the thought.

× I need to remember my work plan every day.

✓ I need to remember my work plan every day.

This sentence is correct and requires no change.

× Therefore, I can stay motivated an be more productive at work.

✓ Therefore, I can stay motivated and be more productive at work.

The word 'an' is a typo and should be 'and' to connect the two verbs properly.

× So I have tried to note them on down on my laptop but I I realized that general really went well.

✓ So I have tried to note them down on my laptop, but I realized that generally it didn't go well.

The phrase 'note them on down on' is incorrect; it should be 'note them down on'. Also, 'general really went well' is unclear and corrected to 'generally it didn't go well' to express the intended meaning.

× So I have changed the math read.

✓ So I have changed the method.

'Math read' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The intended word is 'method'.

× I've just take a piece of paper and put them, skip them, put them down there and it works better.

✓ I've just taken a piece of paper and put them down there, and it works better.

The verb 'take' should be in past participle form 'taken' after 'have'. Also, 'skip them' is unclear and removed for clarity.