Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'I do not have forgot' and awkward phrasing like 'which you remain in my mind'. To improve, try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then provide a specific example with linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things because I have a sharp memory. For instance, I clearly remember an incredible incident from when I was in fifth grade, which has stayed with me ever since.

Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions like 'which I have taken on June 25' and 'which was very. Where for me'. To improve, focus on clear sentence structure and use linking words to explain the situation and its impact. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, last month I forgot about a job interview scheduled for June 25. As a result, I missed a great opportunity, which was a valuable lesson for me to improve my memory.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. To improve, try to organise your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember simple tasks like listing my goals and working on them consistently. To help with this, I write them down so I don't forget and can stay focused.

Gợi ý: Your answer has unclear phrases such as 'writing it on a diving' and incomplete sentences. To improve, use clear and correct vocabulary, complete your sentences, and explain your methods logically with linking words. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

Ví dụ: I remember important tasks by writing them in a diary. This helps me stay dedicated and focused on my goals because I can review them regularly.

× Yes, I think I am pretty good in memorizing things as I have very sharp memory and I do not have forgot that incidents and things that had happened in my life easily.

✓ Yes, I think I am pretty good at memorizing things as I have a very sharp memory and I do not forget incidents and things that have happened in my life easily.

The phrase 'good in memorizing' should be 'good at memorizing' because 'good at' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'I do not have forgot' is incorrect; it should be 'I do not forget' to maintain present tense and correct verb form. Additionally, 'that incidents' should be 'incidents' without 'that' and 'had happened' should be 'have happened' to correctly use present perfect tense for life experiences.

× For example, I vividly remember that when I was in fifth standard, I had an incredible incident which you remain in my mind.

✓ For example, I vividly remember that when I was in fifth standard, I had an incredible incident which remains in my mind.

The phrase 'which you remain in my mind' is incorrect. It should be 'which remains in my mind' to correctly use the third person singular verb 'remains' referring to 'incident'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

× Yes, incidentally, last month I forgot about my job interview which I have taken on June 25.

✓ Yes, incidentally, last month I forgot about my job interview which I had on June 25.

The phrase 'which I have taken on June 25' is incorrect because 'have taken' is present perfect tense and does not fit with the past time reference 'last month'. It should be 'which I had on June 25' using simple past tense to match the time frame.

× I missed the opportunity to get an job which was very.

✓ I missed the opportunity to get a job which was very important.

The article 'an' is incorrect before 'job' because 'job' starts with a consonant sound; it should be 'a job'. Also, the sentence is incomplete ('which was very.'); adding 'important' completes the meaning.

× Where for me, and it was incredible experience for me, so I worked on my memories.

✓ It was an incredible experience for me, so I worked on my memory.

The phrase 'Where for me' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Incredible experience' needs the article 'an'. 'Memories' should be singular 'memory' to refer to the ability to remember. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I have to remember some simple task of for example are performing listing my goals and working on them consistently with the more dedication and hard work so that I can achieve them and have a greater focus on my goal.

✓ I have to remember some simple tasks, for example, performing, listing my goals, and working on them consistently with more dedication and hard work so that I can achieve them and have greater focus on my goals.

The phrase 'task of for example are performing listing' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'tasks, for example, performing, listing my goals'. 'The more dedication' should be 'more dedication' without 'the'. 'Goal' should be plural 'goals' to match the context.

× I also write down the things so that I couldn't.

✓ I also write down things so that I don't forget them.

The phrase 'so that I couldn't' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'so that I don't forget them' to clearly express the purpose of writing things down.

× I remember all the important tasks which I have to perform by writing it on a diving.

✓ I remember all the important tasks which I have to perform by writing them in a diary.

'Writing it on a diving' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'writing them in a diary'. 'Diving' is a wrong word here; 'diary' is the correct noun. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'tasks'.

× I have written a lot of my goals on a diary so that I can work on them persistently and with a lot of dedication.

✓ I have written a lot of my goals in a diary so that I can work on them persistently and with a lot of dedication.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'diary'; it should be 'in a diary'. The pronoun usage is correct here.

× It also has me to clarify my goals and. Who? *.

✓ It also helps me to clarify my goals.

The phrase 'It also has me to clarify my goals and. Who? *.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'It also helps me to clarify my goals' to make a complete and meaningful sentence.