Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
If I go to M, not really good at memory since. Are you ready? I'm praying for what down? It was a pen. Or why don't wait on my phone so that it's not easy to forget?
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yeah, so I want to still dancing college. I had a holiday then I already bought a ticket home. But I remember the one time my I rushed it arrived airport. I hear that the airport will calling my name. I realized that I remember.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I saying Oh my daily life I need to to remember **** **** of food because I have to pay for meal and lunch for my families. So I need to know what what material is is the.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Are you really circle it on the Canada? Can calendar bullet sample? I haven't asked for my G drive license and the task for my house tax. I only circulates or on my phone.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达,句子结构混乱,且未能直接回答问题。建议练习用简洁明了的句子直接回答问题,并使用适当的连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things. However, I usually write important notes on my phone so that I don't forget them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰,语法错误较多,且缺少具体细节。建议用完整句子描述一次忘记重要事情的经历,并使用连接词使叙述更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to arrive at the airport on time for my flight home. I was rushing and heard my name being called, which made me realize my mistake.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清楚。建议明确说明日常需要记住的具体事项,并用连词连接句子,使表达更完整。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember the types of food I buy because I have to pay for meals and lunch for my family.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,且信息不连贯。建议用简单明了的句子说明记忆重要事情的方法,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I usually circle important dates on my calendar or set reminders on my phone to remember important tasks like paying taxes or renewing my driver's license.
× If I go to M, not really good at memory since.
✓ If I go to M, I am not really good at memorizing things.
句子缺少主语和谓语,导致结构不完整。需要补充完整的主语和谓语,使句子通顺。
× I'm praying for what down?
✓ I'm praying for what is going down?
句子结构不完整,缺少谓语动词,导致表达不清楚。需要补充完整谓语。
× Or why don't wait on my phone so that it's not easy to forget?
✓ Or why don't I wait on my phone so that it's not easy to forget?
句子缺少主语,导致结构不完整。需要补充主语使句子完整。
× I had a holiday then I already bought a ticket home.
✓ I had a holiday then I had already bought a ticket home.
描述过去发生的动作时,应该使用过去完成时表示先发生的动作。
× But I remember the one time my I rushed it arrived airport.
✓ But I remember the one time when I rushed to the airport.
句子结构混乱,缺少连词和介词,导致表达不清楚。需要调整句子结构使其通顺。
× I rushed it arrived airport.
✓ I rushed to the airport.
动词rush后应接介词to表示方向,原句中介词使用错误。
× I hear that the airport will calling my name.
✓ I heard that the airport was calling my name.
时态错误且句子结构不完整,应该使用过去时态并调整句子结构。
× I realized that I remember.
✓ I realized that I had forgotten.
原句中代词使用不当,表达意思不清楚。需要用正确的代词和动词形式表达。
× I saying Oh my daily life I need to to remember **** **** of food because I have to pay for meal and lunch for my families.
✓ I am saying in my daily life I need to remember the amount of food because I have to pay for meals and lunch for my family.
代词使用错误,复数形式错误,句子结构混乱。需要调整代词和名词的单复数形式。
× So I need to know what what material is is the.
✓ So I need to know what materials they are.
形容词和名词使用错误,句子不完整。需要正确使用名词复数和动词。
× Are you really circle it on the Canada?
✓ I really circle it on the calendar.
代词使用错误,句子主语和宾语不匹配。需要使用正确的代词和名词。
× Can calendar bullet sample?
✓ I use bullet points on the calendar.
形容词和名词搭配错误,句子不完整。需要调整词语搭配使句子通顺。
× I haven't asked for my G drive license and the task for my house tax.
✓ I haven't applied for my driver's license and paid the house tax.
句子结构混乱,表达不清楚。需要调整句子结构和用词。
× I only circulates or on my phone.
✓ I only circle them on my phone.
代词使用错误,动词形式错误。需要使用正确的代词和动词形式。