Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. Because I'm an absent minded person I often forgets things very easily and even I have to struggle a lot for finding keys sometimes.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, recently I was littered the market for buying some new shoes and I forgot my purse at my at my home and I had to struggle a lot for purchasing the things because I have no money.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I generally need to remember everything in my daily life because I'm often absent minded and for remembering things I have set a reminders and sometimes making a list of the same things.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I can memorize the important things by setting a reminders on my mobile phone or any other social app RO Moreover, I can remember the things by making a list of the same thing so that I cannot for get my important things.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Try to avoid grammatical errors such as 'forgets' which should be 'forget'. Also, make your answer more concise and natural by combining sentences and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' appropriately and ensure subject-verb agreement.
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I'm quite absent-minded and often forget where I put my keys.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Focus on clarity and correct word usage. 'Littered the market' is incorrect; you can say 'went to the market'. Avoid repetition like 'at my at my home'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: Yes, recently I went to the market to buy new shoes, but I forgot my purse at home, so I struggled to make the purchase because I had no money with me.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Improve grammar by using correct articles and verb forms, e.g., 'a reminder' instead of 'a reminders'. Also, make the sentence structure clearer and use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas logically.
Ví dụ: I need to remember many things daily because I'm often absent-minded, so I set reminders and sometimes make lists to help me.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: Avoid grammatical mistakes such as 'a reminders' which should be 'reminders'. Remove unclear parts like 'RO'. Use linking words like 'Moreover' correctly and ensure spelling accuracy, e.g., 'forget'.
Ví dụ: I remember important things by setting reminders on my mobile phone or social apps. Moreover, I make lists so that I don't forget anything important.
× No, I don't think so. Because I'm an absent minded person I often forgets things very easily and even I have to struggle a lot for finding keys sometimes.
✓ No, I don't think so. Because I'm an absent-minded person, I often forget things very easily and even I have to struggle a lot to find keys sometimes.
The verb 'forgets' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'forget' without 's'. Also, 'absent minded' should be hyphenated as 'absent-minded'. The phrase 'for finding keys' should be corrected to 'to find keys' for proper infinitive usage.
× Yes, recently I was littered the market for buying some new shoes and I forgot my purse at my at my home and I had to struggle a lot for purchasing the things because I have no money.
✓ Yes, recently I went to the market to buy some new shoes and I forgot my purse at my home and I had to struggle a lot to purchase the things because I had no money.
The phrase 'was littered the market' is incorrect; the correct past tense verb is 'went to the market'. 'For buying' should be 'to buy' to express purpose. 'At my at my home' has a repetition error and should be 'at my home'. 'For purchasing' should be 'to purchase'. Also, 'have no money' should be in past tense 'had no money' to match the past context.
× I generally need to remember everything in my daily life because I'm often absent minded and for remembering things I have set a reminders and sometimes making a list of the same things.
✓ I generally need to remember everything in my daily life because I'm often absent-minded and to remember things I have set reminders and sometimes make a list of the same things.
The phrase 'a reminders' is incorrect because 'reminders' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. Also, 'for remembering' should be 'to remember' to express purpose. 'Making' should be 'make' to maintain parallel structure.
× I can memorize the important things by setting a reminders on my mobile phone or any other social app RO Moreover, I can remember the things by making a list of the same thing so that I cannot for get my important things.
✓ I can memorize important things by setting reminders on my mobile phone or any other social app. Moreover, I can remember things by making a list of the same things so that I cannot forget my important things.
The phrase 'a reminders' is incorrect; 'reminders' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. 'The important things' can be simplified to 'important things'. 'For get' is a typo and should be 'forget'. Also, 'the things' and 'the same thing' should be consistent in number; 'things' is better here.