Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Actually, before I took the graduation exam, I thought I was good at memorizing things. However, I failed that exam, so now I'm not sure. But compared to some people, I think my memory is still quite good. So yeah.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Of course, yes, absolutely. And just I mentioned before. When I was in a graduation exam, I failed and it answered and that's why I failed the exam and was more you know the key. I don't remember where the keywords or something just like this. So I do forgotten something important.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
You know, I am a student, so the most I need to remember in my daily life is the homework, the keywords of, you know, the English or something like the psychological items or physical items. You know what I mean?
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually write down important things in your notebook or set reminders on my phone. Please help me avoid forgot forgetting them because I can check the node anytime. For example, if I have a meeting I will set an alarm to make sure I'm on time.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应更直接回应问题,避免含糊和重复。可以简洁表达自己的记忆能力,并用具体例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising things. For instance, I was able to remember all the key points for my graduation exam, although I didn't pass, which showed me I still have a decent memory compared to others.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏条理,语法和表达不清晰。应直接回答问题,并用连贯的句子说明忘记的重要事情及原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, during my graduation exam, I forgot some key points which caused me to fail. This experience taught me to prepare better next time.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答应更具体,避免使用口语填充词。可以列举具体需要记住的事项,并简洁说明。
Ví dụ: As a student, I need to remember my homework assignments, important vocabulary in English, and key concepts from psychology and physics classes.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但有语法错误和表达不自然。应注意主谓一致和时态,表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually write down important things in my notebook or set reminders on my phone. This helps me avoid forgetting tasks because I can check my notes anytime. For example, if I have a meeting, I set an alarm to make sure I am on time.
× And just I mentioned before.
✓ As I just mentioned before.
句子中 'just I mentioned before' 语序不正确,应该是 'As I just mentioned before',表示“正如我刚才提到的”。语序错误导致句子不通顺。
× When I was in a graduation exam, I failed and it answered and that's why I failed the exam and was more you know the key.
✓ When I was taking the graduation exam, I failed because I couldn't answer, and that's why I failed the exam; I couldn't remember the key points.
原句时态和表达混乱,'was in a graduation exam' 应改为 'was taking the graduation exam','it answered' 不合适,应表达为 'I couldn't answer',并且句子结构不完整,需要分句表达。
× I do forgotten something important.
✓ I have forgotten something important.
'do forgotten' 是错误的时态搭配,正确用法是现在完成时 'have forgotten',表示过去发生且对现在有影响的动作。
× the keywords of, you know, the English or something like the psychological items or physical items.
✓ the keywords of, you know, English or something like psychological or physical items.
'the English' 中 'English' 不需要冠词 'the',且 'psychological items or physical items' 中 'items' 复数使用正确,但前面冠词和搭配需调整。
× I usually write down important things in your notebook or set reminders on my phone.
✓ I usually write down important things in my notebook or set reminders on my phone.
句中 'your notebook' 应为 'my notebook',因为说话者指的是自己的笔记本,代词使用错误。
× Please help me avoid forgot forgetting them because I can check the node anytime.
✓ Please help me avoid forgetting them because I can check the notes anytime.
'avoid forgot forgetting' 结构错误,应为 'avoid forgetting',动词后应接动名词形式。'node' 应为 'notes',拼写错误。