Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising large amounts of information at once. Therefore, I often forget some specific details.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự liên kết và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý với nhau để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Once, when I was traveling, I finished packing and arrived at the airport, but I suddenly remembered that I had forgotten my compact camera, which was very important to me.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều câu không hoàn chỉnh và thiếu sự liên kết. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Usually, when I go grocery shopping, I make a shopping list to remember what I need to buy. For my daily work, I keep a To-Do List to organize my tasks.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và liên kết các ý để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: To remember important things and stay organized, I usually keep lists, such as a To-Do List or an item list, to ensure I don't forget anything essential.

× I don't consider myself a person good at remembering things if I am given a lot of information information.

✓ I don't consider myself a person good at remembering things if I am given a lot of information at once.

The original sentence has a repeated word 'information' and an unclear phrase 'Come at once'. The phrase should be 'at once' to indicate all information given simultaneously. The sentence structure is corrected to improve clarity and remove redundancy.

× Come at once.

✓ (This phrase is removed as it is incomplete and unclear.)

The phrase 'Come at once' is incomplete and does not fit the sentence context. It should be removed to maintain sentence clarity.

× It is easy for me to tend to forget some particular things.

✓ I tend to forget some particular things easily.

The phrase 'It is easy for me to tend to forget' is awkward and redundant. Simplifying to 'I tend to forget some particular things easily' improves sentence flow and clarity.

× One time I traveled. An app to. Finishing packing up everything. And arriving at the airport, I suddenly remembered that I forgot my Cara play the compact camera which is which is very.

✓ One time I traveled. After finishing packing everything and arriving at the airport, I suddenly remembered that I forgot my compact camera, which is very important.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'An app to' and 'Cara play' seem to be errors or misheard words. The corrected sentence combines ideas properly and clarifies the meaning.

× On. Usually when I go grocery shopping I tend to have a shopping list.

✓ Usually when I go grocery shopping, I tend to have a shopping list.

The word 'On.' at the beginning is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow. Removing it improves clarity.

× To remember what I need to buy some and.

✓ To remember what I need to buy.

The phrase 'some and' is incomplete and incorrect. Removing it makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× For my daily work I have my To Do List to make my server. What to do?

✓ For my daily work, I have my To Do List to remind me what to do.

The phrase 'make my server. What to do?' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'remind me what to do' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× To remember him important things and be more well organized.

✓ To remember important things and be better organized.

The phrase 'him important things' is incorrect; 'him' should be removed. Also, 'more well organized' is awkward; 'better organized' is the correct comparative form.

× Usually I keep a list.

✓ Usually, I keep a list.

Adding a comma after 'Usually' improves sentence readability.

× For example it To Do List or a item list to make me to make me not forget anything important.

✓ For example, a To Do List or an item list helps me not forget anything important.

The original sentence has repetition 'to make me to make me' and article errors ('a item' should be 'an item'). The correction removes repetition and fixes articles.

× An essential.

✓ It is essential.

The phrase 'An essential.' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be a complete sentence like 'It is essential.' to convey meaning.