Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm good at memorizing things, but simple. I can easily remember important days in the phone numbers.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
No. I usually make her detail that schedule. So organize my days. And he can help me. Remember important things.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need to remember my study tackles. In my teddy liable. Especially meetings and the home Walker did allies.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually use my smart phone to make a schedule to helps me remember important things.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议使用更自然流畅的句子结构,并避免模糊表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing things, especially simple information like important dates and phone numbers.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答语句不连贯且含糊,建议使用完整句子并清晰表达如何避免忘记重要事情。
Ví dụ: No, I rarely forget important things because I usually organize my schedule carefully, which helps me remember everything.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答中有大量语法和词汇错误,导致意思不明确。建议使用简单明了的句子,具体说明需要记住的事项。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my study tasks, meetings, and household chores.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但有语法错误,建议注意主谓一致,并丰富细节使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: I usually use my smartphone to create schedules and reminders, which help me remember important tasks and appointments.
× Yes, I'm good at memorizing things, but simple.
✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing simple things.
这里'simple'应该修饰复数名词'things',因此需要将'simple'放在'things'前面,形成'simple things',表示简单的事情。
× I can easily remember important days in the phone numbers.
✓ I can easily remember important dates and phone numbers.
'days'和'phone numbers'是两个不同的复数名词,且'important days in the phone numbers'表达不清,应分开表达为'important dates and phone numbers'。
× No. I usually make her detail that schedule.
✓ No. I usually make a detailed schedule.
'make her detail that schedule'语法错误,'her'用法不当,且表达不清,应改为'make a detailed schedule',表示制定详细的日程。
× So organize my days.
✓ So I organize my days.
句子缺少主语,应加上主语'I',使句子完整。
× And he can help me. Remember important things.
✓ And it can help me remember important things.
此处指代的是前文提到的'schedule'或'phone',应使用'it'而非'he',且'remember'不应单独成句,应与前句连贯。
× I need to remember my study tackles.
✓ I need to remember my study tasks.
'tackles'用法错误,应为'tasks'表示任务。
× In my teddy liable.
✓ In my daily life.
'teddy liable'是错误拼写,应为'daily life'表示日常生活。
× Especially meetings and the home Walker did allies.
✓ Especially meetings and homework deadlines.
'home Walker did allies'拼写错误,应为'homework deadlines'表示作业截止日期。
× I usually use my smart phone to make a schedule to helps me remember important things.
✓ I usually use my smartphone to make a schedule to help me remember important things.
'to helps'中动词help应为原形,因其跟在不定式'to'后面。