Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“week”应为“weak”，“gone”应为“go”，句子结构不完整。建议使用简单且正确的句子表达观点，并避免重复和不必要的停顿。

Ví dụ: No, I am not good at memorising things. For example, when I go on vacation abroad, I often forget to bring important items like my ID card or passport.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达经历，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For instance, I once forgot to bring my ID card on a trip, which was very frustrating. I try to avoid such mistakes now.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不准确的问题，如“I saying”应为“I think”或“I would say”，并且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达和连接词。

Ví dụ: I think I need to remember some small things every day. For example, I have to charge my phone at night before school, bring my laptop to the library, and always carry my ID card.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法混乱，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，清楚说明记忆方法，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: I remember important things by writing them down in a notepad or adding them to my daily planner. I also put reminders in noticeable places and remind myself repeatedly.

× I am a person who week at memorizing things.

✓ I am a person who is weak at memorizing things.

这里的 'week' 是拼写错误，正确的词是 'weak'，表示“弱的”。此外，句子缺少动词 'is'，应为 'who is weak'。

× Especially when I gone.

✓ Especially when I go.

这里使用了 'gone'，是过去分词形式，但句子需要表达习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时 'go'。

× On a vacation aboard, I always remember to bring my ID card or even passport.

✓ On a vacation abroad, I always remember to bring my ID card or even my passport.

'aboard' 是错误拼写，正确应为 'abroad'，表示“在国外”。另外，'passport' 前应加冠词 'my'，保持一致。

× Yeah, I twice for. Forgot to bring my ID card when I start on the trip so it's kind of frustrating that's those tiny small things easily slipped my mind sometimes.

✓ Yeah, I forgot twice. I forgot to bring my ID card when I started the trip, so it's kind of frustrating that those tiny small things easily slip my mind sometimes.

'I twice for' 语序错误，应为 'I forgot twice'。'start' 应用过去式 'started'，因为描述过去的动作。'slipped' 应用一般现在时 'slip'，因为描述习惯性动作。

× So I I don't want this things happen twice.

✓ So I don't want these things to happen twice.

'this things' 中 'this' 应改为复数形式 'these'，因为 'things' 是复数。

× I saying there are some tiny things that I need to remember in daily life, for example.

✓ I am saying there are some tiny things that I need to remember in daily life, for example.

'I saying' 缺少助动词 'am'，正确形式为 'I am saying'。

× or I need to bring my laptop when I go on the library.

✓ or I need to bring my laptop when I go to the library.

'go on the library' 中介词错误，正确应为 'go to the library'。

× Well, I do remember important things by noting them in on a notepad or just add in my.

✓ Well, I do remember important things by noting them on a notepad or just adding them in my...

'noting them in on a notepad' 中介词重复，应为 'noting them on a notepad'。'add in my' 结构不完整，且动词形式应为动名词 'adding'。

× To know some in a noticeable place, I and I would remind me.

✓ I put some notes in a noticeable place, and I would remind myself.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，且 'remind me' 应为反身代词 'remind myself'。

× Remind myself again and again in my.

✓ I remind myself again and again.

句子不完整，缺少宾语和完整结构，应补充完整且去掉多余部分。