Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
I used to be very good at memorizing things, but eyes I get older I found my memories got. A little bit do Terra rated such as I tried to memorize some English words four hours test but I found I.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
I have gotten to pay my credit card bill on time for several times and I got this really heavy late. Charge face.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I don't have to memorize some specific things for my daily life, but I hope I won't forget about. Submit important. Documents to court on DO. May change their very important.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I'll try to make a note on my phone or computer and set alarm.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议加强语法基础,避免语句不完整和拼写错误,同时回答应更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: I used to be good at memorizing things, but as I get older, I find it harder to remember, especially when I try to memorize many English words for a test.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不流畅且有语法错误,建议使用完整句子并清晰描述经历,避免词汇拼写错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten to pay my credit card bill on time several times, which caused me to pay heavy late fees.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不连贯且有语法和拼写错误,建议组织完整句子,明确表达需要记住的重要事项。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to submit important documents to the court on time because they are very important.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁且表达清晰,但可以增加细节和连接词使回答更丰富自然。
Ví dụ: I usually make a note on my phone or computer and set an alarm to remind me of important things, so I don't forget them.
× I used to be very good at memorizing things, but eyes I get older I found my memories got.
✓ I used to be very good at memorizing things, but as I got older, I found my memory got worse.
句中时态混乱,'get older'应使用过去式'as I got older','memories got'应改为'memory got worse',表达记忆变差。建议注意时态一致性和表达完整。
× A little bit do Terra rated such as I tried to memorize some English words four hours test but I found I.
✓ My memory deteriorated a little bit. For example, I tried to memorize some English words for a four-hour test, but I found it difficult.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语,表达不完整。建议分句表达,补充缺失成分,使句子完整通顺。
× I have gotten to pay my credit card bill on time for several times and I got this really heavy late.
✓ I have failed to pay my credit card bill on time several times, and I got a really heavy late fee.
'have gotten to pay'用法错误,应为'failed to pay'表示未按时付款。'late'后缺少名词'fee'。建议使用正确的动词短语和补全名词。
× Charge face.
✓ Late fee.
'Charge face'是错误搭配,应为'late fee'表示滞纳金。建议学习常用搭配。
× I don't have to memorize some specific things for my daily life, but I hope I won't forget about.
✓ I don't have to memorize many specific things for my daily life, but I hope I won't forget them.
'forget about'后缺少宾语,且'about'不必要。建议直接用'forget them'指代前文内容。
× Submit important. Documents to court on DO. May change their very important.
✓ Submitting important documents to the court on due dates is very important.
句中介词和表达混乱,'on DO. May change their'无意义。建议使用正确介词和完整表达。
× I'll try to make a note on my phone or computer and set alarm.
✓ I'll try to make a note on my phone or computer and set an alarm.
缺少冠词'an','set alarm'应为'set an alarm'。建议注意冠词使用。