Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和词汇。可以先直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因，保持语言流畅自然。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things because I find it difficult to remember details. Whenever I have exams or need to memorise something, I have to spend a lot of time studying.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议先直接回答问题，然后说明具体做法，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词，使表达更清楚自然。

Ví dụ: No, I have never forgotten anything important because I usually write down important things in my notebook and set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为完整，但存在语法和词汇错误，如“power, present”应为“proper presents”。建议注意词汇的准确使用，并尝试使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: As a student, I need to remember important exams, which are my top priority. Besides that, I also remember my parents' and friends' birthdays so I can give them proper presents and celebrate with them.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更简单明了的句子结构，明确说明方法，并使用连接词使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: I always carry a notebook with me to write down important things. Also, I set special reminders on my phone to help me remember important tasks.

× I think memories things is rarely a heart for me.

✓ I think memorizing things is rarely hard for me.

这里'memories things'是错误的复数形式，应该用动名词'memorizing things'表示记忆的动作。'a heart'应为'hard'，表示困难。

× I'm not that kind of people that had the ability to memory things, so every time if I got some exams or I have to memorize something, I need to spend a lot of time.

✓ I'm not that kind of person who has the ability to memorize things, so every time I have some exams or I have to memorize something, I need to spend a lot of time.

'people'是复数，前面用单数'kind of'，应改为单数'person'。'that had'时态不对，应为现在时'have'。'memory'应为动词'memorize'。

× No, I have never forgotten something important because and not have that I'm not I did not have a good memory.

✓ No, I have never forgotten something important because I do not have a good memory.

句子结构混乱，'did not have'应改为现在时'do not have'，保持时态一致。

× So every time if I have some important thing, I will write it down on my note and I will also room I will also write it down on my phone so they can just. A.

✓ So every time I have something important, I will write it down in my notebook and also on my phone so I can just check it.

'note'应为'notebook'，'room'无意义，应删除。'they can just. A.'不完整，改为'I can just check it'。

× I have to remember like parents and friends birthday so I can give them power, present and celebrate for them.

✓ I have to remember my parents' and friends' birthdays so I can give them proper presents and celebrate with them.

'parents and friends birthday'应为复数所有格'parents' and friends' birthdays'。'power, present'应为'proper presents'。

× I have to remember like parents and friends birthday so I can give them power, present and celebrate for them.

✓ I have to remember my parents' and friends' birthdays so I can give them proper presents and celebrate with them.

'celebrate for them'应改为'celebrate with them'，表示和他们一起庆祝。

× I will write the important thing, tell it what is small.

✓ I will write the important things, no matter how small they are.

'tell it what is small'表达不清，应改为'no matter how small they are'，表示无论多小。

× On my phone I said a special reminder.

✓ On my phone, I set a special reminder.

'said'用错，应为'set'，表示设置提醒。

× I write the important sync on it, so it can help me to remember the important thing.

✓ I write the important things on it, so it can help me remember the important things.

'sync'应为'things'，保持复数一致。