Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think I'm not very good at memorizing things. Since I was young, I have always found it difficult to remember details and I often forget important information. For example, I sometimes forget where I put my case or important dates.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Actually, I haven't forgotten anything important so far because I usually set alarms and reminders on my phone to help me remember important events. For example, if I have a meeting or an appointment, I always make sure to create notification in advance. This way I can stay organized.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
There is nothing I need to remember in my daily life is daily life let just the usual routine with nothing more.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I surely remember important things by writing them down in up a planner or using reminder apps on my phone. This mess mess that helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget that lies or appointments.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答较为自然且内容相关,但句子较长且有些重复,建议简化表达并避免冗余,同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things. For instance, I often forget where I put my keys or important dates, which can be quite frustrating.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且结构清晰,但可以使用更多连接词如“therefore”或“so”来增强逻辑性,同时注意避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: I haven't forgotten anything important because I set alarms and reminders on my phone. Therefore, I can stay organized and never miss meetings or appointments.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且语法错误较多,建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节,避免模糊和重复。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember tasks like going to work, cooking meals, and attending classes.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,建议简化句子结构,使用正确的词汇,并增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using reminder apps on my phone. This helps me stay organized and not forget meetings or appointments.
× There is nothing I need to remember in my daily life is daily life let just the usual routine with nothing more.
✓ There is nothing I need to remember in my daily life; it's just the usual routine with nothing more.
原句结构混乱,缺少连接词或标点,导致句子不通顺。建议使用分号或连接词将句子分开,使表达清晰。
× I surely remember important things by writing them down in up a planner or using reminder apps on my phone.
✓ I surely remember important things by writing them down in a planner or using reminder apps on my phone.
原句中“in up a planner”中“up”多余且错误,应去掉以符合正确的量词和介词搭配。