Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. So for example, when I started learning ecologist knowledge is right. Yeah, yeah, my notebooks. So. 'Cause I.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have about 10 something important. Why are university? Their life or I forgotten. A tender antenna class. Uh, and my teacher. My teacher tell Maine. Don't, Don't talk again.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need the to remember so much in my daily life or in when I go to office. I need a remember subway. I will. I will.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I will surely. Why would a child my mother told me the. Further, **** is a better than the. Special memory, so I will. I will remember you too for my E my. Not another book.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不清晰,缺乏具体细节。建议回答时先给出明确的主题句,然后用简洁的句子补充具体例子,避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things. For example, when I study ecology, I always take detailed notes in my notebooks, which helps me remember important concepts.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,语法和表达错误较多,难以理解。建议直接回答问题,说明忘记了什么重要的事情,并简要说明原因或结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, once I forgot to submit an assignment at university, and my teacher reminded me not to repeat the mistake.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议先明确回答需要记住什么,然后用具体细节支持,使用连词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many things, such as my work schedule and the subway routes I take to the office.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答非常混乱,缺乏逻辑和具体内容。建议先说明记忆重要事情的方法,然后用具体例子说明如何应用这些方法。
Ví dụ: I remember important things by writing them down in my notebook, as my mother advised me that writing helps improve memory.
× Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. So for example, when I started learning ecologist knowledge is right. Yeah, yeah, my notebooks. So. 'Cause I.
✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things. For example, when I started learning ecology, I took notes in my notebooks.
原句结构混乱,缺少完整的句子和逻辑连接。应将断句合并,补充缺失的成分,使句子完整通顺。建议学习如何构造完整句子,避免断句过多。
× Yes, I have about 10 something important. Why are university? Their life or I forgotten. A tender antenna class. Uh, and my teacher. My teacher tell Maine. Don't, Don't talk again.
✓ Yes, I have forgotten about 10 important things at university. In my life, I forgot during a class. And my teacher told me, "Don't talk again."
原句时态混乱,动词时态不一致且表达不清。应使用过去时态描述过去发生的事情。建议注意动词时态的正确使用,尤其是过去时。
× I need the to remember so much in my daily life or in when I go to office. I need a remember subway. I will. I will.
✓ I need to remember many things in my daily life or when I go to the office. I need to remember the subway. I will.
介词使用错误,如“in when”应为“when”,“to office”应为“to the office”。此外,动词形式错误,“a remember”应为“to remember”。建议加强介词和动词不定式的用法学习。
× I will surely. Why would a child my mother told me the. Further, **** is a better than the. Special memory, so I will. I will remember you too for my E my. Not another book.
✓ I will surely remember. When I was a child, my mother told me that practice is better than special memory, so I will remember using my notes, not just another book.
情态动词使用不当,句子结构混乱,缺少连贯性。应正确使用情态动词表达意愿或计划,并注意句子完整。建议练习情态动词的正确用法和句子连贯表达。