Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, which affects naturalness and effectiveness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorizing things. Sometimes I forget important tasks, so I often rely on others or use reminders to help me.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, provide specific reasons or examples, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially when I am very busy or stressed. To avoid this, I try to relax and organize my tasks carefully.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences, link your ideas smoothly, and provide specific examples to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember various things like routines and appointments. To help me, I usually set alarms on my phone and sometimes ask my friends or colleagues to remind me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence, explain your methods with specific details, and use linking words to connect your ideas coherently.

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually take notes on my phone or laptop. Sometimes, I also ask my parents to remind me, and I set alarms to help me stay organized.

× I usually forget about things that I need to do that sometimes.

✓ I usually forget things that I need to do sometimes.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'forget' in this context. The verb 'forget' is directly followed by the object without 'about'. Removing 'about' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I have to ask other people for memorizing mine, work or scheduled.

✓ I have to ask other people to help me remember my work or schedule.

The phrase 'for memorizing mine' is incorrect. 'Memorizing' should be replaced with 'to help me remember' and 'mine' should be 'my'. Also, 'scheduled' should be 'schedule' as a noun.

× So. I am not good at morrows eatings.

✓ So, I am not good at remembering things.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words 'morrows eatings'. It should be a complete sentence with proper vocabulary. 'Remembering things' fits the context better.

× Definitely I find it.

✓ Definitely, I have forgotten important things.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. The student likely means they have forgotten important things. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I'm really like to forget things when I am busy or structs.

✓ I really tend to forget things when I am busy or stressed.

The phrase 'I'm really like to forget' is incorrect. It should be 'I really tend to forget'. Also, 'structs' is likely a misspelling of 'stressed'.

× So I have to relax my mind to remember some things.

✓ So I have to relax my mind to remember some things.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the context, so no correction is needed.

× If necessary.

✓ If necessary, I do that.

'If necessary.' is a sentence fragment. It needs to be connected to a main clause to be complete.

× I have to remember it.

✓ I have to remember many things.

'It' is vague here. The student likely means multiple things, so 'many things' is more appropriate.

× Different kinds of things in my daily life, specially daily routines and appointments.

✓ Different kinds of things in my daily life, especially daily routines and appointments.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate emphasis.

× In order to remember these things.

✓ In order to remember these things,

This is a sentence fragment and needs to be connected to the following sentence or completed.

× Are usually ask my friends and colleges to remind me and sometimes I make an alarm.

✓ I usually ask my friends and colleagues to remind me, and sometimes I set an alarm.

The sentence lacks a subject at the beginning ('Are' should be 'I'). 'Colleges' is a misspelling of 'colleagues'. 'Make an alarm' should be 'set an alarm'.

× I set an alarm in my phone.

✓ I set an alarm on my phone.

The correct preposition with 'phone' is 'on', not 'in'.

× To remember a socialist thing is my daily life.

✓ Remembering important things is part of my daily life.

The original sentence is unclear and contains the word 'socialist' which is likely a mishearing or typo. The correction clarifies the intended meaning.

× I like to take notes.

✓ I like to take notes.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Sometimes I ask, I ask my parents to remind me in, I said, and alone in my phone.

✓ Sometimes I ask my parents to remind me, and I set alarms on my phone.

The original sentence is fragmented and confusing. The correction clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.