Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Отвечайте более прямо и кратко: начните с темы (topic sentence), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретные детали. Избегайте лишних фраз и грамматических ошибок (например, 'everything what connect with it' → 'everything related to it'). Используйте связки для плавности (for example, because, so).

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is my coffee machine. I use it every morning because it makes fresh espresso quickly, and the built‑in grinder keeps the beans fresh. For example, it saves me time on busy weekdays and always gives me a consistent cup.

Gợi ý: Говорите более чётко и стройте простые полные предложения. Начните с прямого ответа (Yes/No), затем поясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Уберите повторения и заполнители (например, 'uh', 'it's it's'). Исправьте грамматику: 'we rely on these machines' и 'another way of life' неясно — скажите 'a very different way of life' или 'hard to imagine life without them'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think they are very important. Washing machines and vacuum cleaners save a lot of time and effort, so people can focus on work or family. For example, a washing machine washes large loads quickly, which is essential for busy households.

Gợi ý: Начинайте с прямого ответа, затем объясните причину коротко и ясно. Избегайте неправильного порядка слов и лишних слов ('totally describe every everything' некорректно). Используйте связки ('because', 'so', 'in order to') и конкретику (например, 'to avoid damage' или 'to understand safety features').

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine. I do this to learn the safety precautions and correct settings so the device lasts longer and I avoid accidents.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте ясно: начните с 'Yes, because...' и дайте одно‑два конкретных объяснения. Избегайте неправильного порядка слов и лишних повторов ('improper using make because of damage' должно быть 'improper use can cause damage'). Вместо 'research' лучше 'read' or 'follow'.

Ví dụ: Yes, because improper use can damage a machine or even cause injuries. For example, following the manual helps you choose the right settings and perform regular maintenance to extend the appliance's life.

× Oh, it's very interesting question.

✓ Oh, it's a very interesting question.

Missing indefinite article before adjective+noun; in English use 'a' before singular countable nouns modified by an adjective. Suggestion: add 'a' before 'very interesting question'.

× Actually I don't know how to answer this question because I have a lot of favorite machines in my home.

✓ Actually, I don't know how to answer this question because I have many favorite machines at home.

Use of 'a lot of' is acceptable but 'many' sounds more natural here; also 'in my home' is awkward, 'at home' is standard. Add comma after 'Actually'. Suggestion: use 'many' and 'at home'.

× For instance, coffee machine is one of my favorites.

✓ For instance, the coffee machine is one of my favorites.

Singular countable noun 'coffee machine' requires a definite article when referring to a specific appliance in the home. Suggestion: use 'the coffee machine' or plural 'coffee machines' if speaking generally.

× I love coffee and everything what connect with it.

✓ I love coffee and everything that is connected with it.

Use 'that' not 'what' after 'everything'; verbs need correct passive/active form 'is connected' or simpler 'that connects'. Suggestion: say 'everything that is connected with it' or 'everything connected with it'.

× Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

✓ Do you think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are important?

The term 'sweeping machines' is unusual; 'vacuum cleaners' or 'sweepers' is more natural. Also original sentence's plurality is fine but word choice was odd. Suggestion: use common plural nouns 'washing machines and vacuum cleaners'.

× Definitely yes, I can't imagine our life without using washing machine or sweeping machine machines because we are so, uh, so rely on these machines that another way of life.

✓ Definitely yes. I can't imagine life without using washing machines or vacuum cleaners because we rely on these machines so much; another way of life would be impossible.

Errors: wrong word order 'so rely on' should be 'rely on so much'; repetition 'sweeping machine machines' and singular/plural mismatches. 'Our life' can be simply 'life'. Sentence run-on and unclear clause 'that another way of life' needs completion. Suggestion: split into two clear sentences, fix verb phrases and plurality.

× It's it's just impossible to.

✓ It's just impossible to imagine.

Sentence fragment: 'impossible to' requires an infinitive verb to complete meaning. Suggestion: add the verb 'imagine' to finish the thought.

× Absolutely yes. I always before using totally describe every everything because it's very important to use each machine in the right way because it helps to keep it in a good condition for a long time.

✓ Absolutely. I always read the instructions before using a machine because it's very important to use each machine correctly; this helps keep it in good condition for a long time.

Problems: word order 'always before using totally describe every everything' is incorrect; use appropriate verb 'read the instructions' and 'correctly' as adverb; avoid double 'because'. Suggestion: say 'I always read the instructions before using a machine' and use 'correctly' and 'helps keep'.

× Yes, I do, because improper using make because of damage for every for each machine.

✓ Yes, I do, because improper use can cause damage to any machine.

'Improper using' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'improper use'. 'Make because of damage' is ungrammatical; use modal 'can' and verb 'cause damage to'. Remove redundant 'for every for each'. Suggestion: 'improper use can cause damage to any machine.'

× That's why it's necessary to carefully research their instructions and to take care about it.

✓ That's why it's necessary to carefully read the instructions and take care of them.

Use 'read the instructions' rather than 'research their instructions'; 'take care about it' is incorrect—use 'take care of them' for plural 'instructions' or 'take care of it' for a single machine. Suggestion: 'carefully read the instructions and take care of them.'