Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise and add a brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (too many, it provides), and one specific reason or example. Use a linking word if you add a second detail.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it makes cleaning clothes quick and effortless. For example, I can wash a week’s worth of laundry in one cycle, which saves me several hours each week.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and fix grammar and redundancy. Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, for example). Avoid repeating words and check article usage.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are essential because they help maintain hygiene at home. For example, a washing machine ensures our clothes are properly cleaned, and a vacuum saves time compared with manual sweeping.

Gợi ý: Be concise and correct awkward phrases. State your habit clearly, then give a specific reason and an example. Use correct collocations (read the instructions, avoid mishaps) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to operate it safely. For instance, the washing machine manual tells me the correct detergent and cycle to prevent damage or accidents.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer then one clear reason with a concrete example. Improve phrasing (reading the instructions, avoid mishaps) and avoid repetition. Use a linking phrase to connect reason and example.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is important to read instructions because they reduce the risk of accidents and prolong the machine’s life. For example, following the recommended load size on a washer prevents overloading and mechanical problems.

× In my home there are too much machines but my favorite machine is washing machine because it provide me clean and easy to wash clothes.

✓ In my home there are too many machines, but my favorite machine is the washing machine because it provides me with clean clothes and makes washing easy.

'Too much' is used with uncountable nouns; use 'too many' for countable 'machines' (ID 1). 'Washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific appliance in the home (ID 17). 'Provide' must agree with singular subject 'washing machine', so use 'provides' (third person singular, ID 2). Add 'with' after 'provides' to show what it gives, and rephrase 'clean and easy to wash clothes' to 'clean clothes and makes washing easy' for clarity and correct modifier order.

× In my home there are too much machines but my favorite machine is washing machine because it provide me clean and easy to wash clothes.

✓ In my home there are too many machines, but my favorite machine is the washing machine because it provides me with clean clothes and makes washing easy.

The verb 'provide' must take an -s in the present simple with a singular third-person subject ('washing machine'), so 'provides' is correct (ID 2). Also include the preposition 'with' after 'provides' to form the correct verb-object structure (ID 11).

× In my home there are too much machines but my favorite machine is washing machine because it provide me clean and easy to wash clothes.

✓ In my home there are too many machines, but my favorite machine is the washing machine because it provides me with clean clothes and makes washing easy.

'Too much' is for uncountable nouns; 'machines' is countable, so use 'too many' (ID 14). This change makes the quantifier agree with the noun type.

× Well definitely washing machines and sweeping machines are most important because in every home there is must need because we daily wear a a clean clothes.

✓ Well, definitely washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because every home needs them, since we wear clean clothes every day.

'There is must need' is ungrammatical. Use direct subject-verb 'every home needs them' to show necessity (ID 3 and 26). Also 'sweeping machines' is better as 'vacuum cleaners' for natural English; 'we daily wear a a clean clothes' has word order and article errors—use 'wear clean clothes every day' (article and plural issues, IDs 22 and 1).

× Well definitely washing machines and sweeping machines are most important because in every home there is must need because we daily wear a a clean clothes.

✓ Well, definitely washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because every home needs them, since we wear clean clothes every day.

'Most important' can be used but sounds unnatural here; 'very important' fits better. 'Daily wear' is an adverb placement issue—place frequency adverb 'every day' after the verb phrase (ID 20 and 13). Removed duplicate 'a' and corrected plural 'clothes'.

× Well definitely washing machines and sweeping machines are most important because in every home there is must need because we daily wear a a clean clothes.

✓ Well, definitely washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because every home needs them, since we wear clean clothes every day.

'A a clean clothes' contains extra article and 'clothes' is plural so no article 'a' should be used (ID 22). Also 'the most important' would require context; 'very important' is clearer here.

× Well definitely I read the instructions before using a machine because in the instruction we get a lot of the knowledge from it.

✓ Well, I definitely read the instructions before using a machine because we get a lot of information from them.

Use present simple 'read' is acceptable but position adverb 'definitely' should follow subject for natural order (ID 6 and 20). 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' and 'a lot of the knowledge' is unnatural—use 'a lot of information' (ID 13 and 11). Replace 'it' with 'them' to match plural 'instructions' (pronoun error, ID 12).

× Well definitely I read the instructions before using a machine because in the instruction we get a lot of the knowledge from it.

✓ Well, I definitely read the instructions before using a machine because we get a lot of information from them.

Pronoun 'it' refers to singular 'instruction', but we changed to plural 'instructions', so use 'them' (ID 12). Also avoid 'the knowledge'—use 'information' for general, uncountable material (ID 13).

× So in the future miss happening should be avoided by seeming all the labels and instructions so we use it properly in the future.

✓ So in the future mishaps should be avoided by reading all the labels and instructions so we can use the machine properly.

The original has several structural problems and made-up phrasing: 'miss happening' should be 'mishaps' or 'accidents' (ID 26). 'Seeming' is incorrect; the gerund after 'by' needs a verb 'reading' (ID 8). 'Use it properly in the future' is repetitive; 'use the machine properly' is clearer. Also add 'can' to show result 'so we can use...'.

× So in the future miss happening should be avoided by seeming all the labels and instructions so we use it properly in the future.

✓ So in the future mishaps should be avoided by reading all the labels and instructions so we can use the machine properly.

After 'by' use a gerund ('reading') to indicate the method of avoiding mishaps (ID 8). 'Seeming' is not the correct verb here.

× Well, definitely it is important to read the instructions because by reading the instructions we get a lot of the knowledge from it and in the future mishappening should be avoided by it.

✓ Well, definitely it is important to read the instructions because by reading them we gain a lot of information, and this helps avoid mishaps in the future.

Use 'them' to match plural 'instructions' (pronoun error, ID 12). 'Get a lot of the knowledge' is awkward—use 'gain a lot of information' (ID 13). 'Mishappening' is incorrect; use 'mishaps' or 'accidents' and rephrase passive 'should be avoided by it' to active result 'this helps avoid mishaps' (ID 26 and 21).