Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher. It saves me a lot of time and effort by cleaning the dishes quickly, so I can spend more time working or playing with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单，表达有语法错误，建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并提供更具体的理由或例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in daily life because they save a lot of time. Moreover, these machines clean more thoroughly than we can by hand, which helps keep our homes hygienic.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I usually don't read the instructions because they are long and hard to understand. Instead, I prefer to watch online videos that show how to use the machine.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构可以更自然，建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because without someone to show you how to use the machine, the manual helps you understand its functions and avoid mistakes.

× It helps me to relieve a lot of stress of cleaning and brings my life a lot of quicker and not and I can use the rest of the time to work and to play with my friends.

✓ It helps me to relieve a lot of the stress of cleaning and makes my life a lot quicker, and I can use the rest of the time to work and play with my friends.

这里“stress of cleaning”前缺少定冠词“the”，表示特指清洁带来的压力；“brings my life a lot of quicker and not”表达不清，应该用“makes my life a lot quicker”来表达“让生活更快”；“and not”多余，应删除。整体句子需要调整使表达更流畅。

× Also, the machine can be clean much better than people's hand.

✓ Also, the machine can clean much better than people's hands.

这里“the machine can be clean”错误使用了被动语态，应该用主动语态“the machine can clean”；“people's hand”应为复数“people's hands”，因为人们有多只手。

× I don't usually read the instructions before using machine because sometimes I think it's quite long and the words for me is too difficult.

✓ I don't usually read the instructions before using a machine because sometimes I think it's quite long and the words are too difficult for me.

“using machine”缺少冠词，应为“using a machine”；“the words for me is too difficult”语序不当且主谓不一致，应改为“the words are too difficult for me”。

× So I'd rather to search online about what machine I'm using and to watch the people's to teach me.

✓ So I'd rather search online about what machine I'm using and watch people teach me.

“I'd rather”后面不加“to”，应直接接动词原形；“the people's to teach me”结构错误，应改为“watch people teach me”，去掉所有格和不定式。

× So when you are alone, it's better to read the instruction and you can know more about your machine.

✓ So when you are alone, it's better to read the instructions and you can know more about your machine.

“read the instruction”中“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”，因为通常说明书是复数形式。