Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by adding a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly and by using a wider range of vocabulary to make your response more engaging. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the refrigerator because it keeps food fresh for longer. Moreover, it preserves fruits and vegetables effectively, which helps reduce food waste and save money. Therefore, it is undoubtedly one of the most essential appliances in my kitchen.

Gợi ý: There is a confusion between 'sweeping machines' and 'sewing machines' in your answer, which affects clarity. Also, the last sentence is unclear and contains errors. To improve, ensure you understand the question correctly, use appropriate vocabulary, and provide clear, specific examples with proper linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern homes. They save time and effort compared to manual cleaning, which is especially useful for busy people. For instance, washing machines clean clothes thoroughly and hygienically, while sweeping machines help keep floors clean efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on sentence structure, use linking words for coherence, and avoid redundancy. Also, try to make your examples clearer and more natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because it helps me operate it safely and correctly. This prevents accidents and ensures the product functions properly. For example, when I get a new kitchen appliance, reading the manual helps me avoid damaging it or injuring myself.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by correcting minor grammatical errors. Also, try to provide a more specific example to enrich your response.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it is essential to read instructions carefully before using any machine. Doing so helps us operate devices safely and correctly, which prevents accidents and damage. For example, when using a kitchen appliance or electronic device, following the instructions ensures they work properly and have a longer lifespan.

× For example, using a washing machine ensures clothes are cleaned thoroughly and hygienic, while sewing machines make cleaning floats.

✓ For example, using a washing machine ensures clothes are cleaned thoroughly and hygienically, while sewing machines make cleaning easier.

The word 'hygienic' is an adjective but here it should be an adverb 'hygienically' to modify the verb 'cleaned'. Also, 'make cleaning floats' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'make cleaning easier' to convey the intended meaning.

× Using a machine Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and correctly.

✓ Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and correctly.

The phrase 'Using a machine' at the beginning is misplaced and causes sentence structure error. Removing it clarifies the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× For example, when I use a machine new kitchen appliance, reading the manual ensures I don't damage it or hurt me.

✓ For example, when I use a new kitchen appliance, reading the manual ensures I don't damage it or hurt myself.

The adjective 'new' should come before the noun 'kitchen appliance'. Also, 'hurt me' is incorrect reflexive pronoun usage; it should be 'hurt myself'.

× For example, when I use a machine new kitchen appliance, reading the manual ensures I don't damage it or hurt me.

✓ For example, when I use a new kitchen appliance, reading the manual ensures I don't damage it or hurt myself.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrect here because the subject and object refer to the same person; the reflexive pronoun 'myself' should be used instead.

× For example, when using kitchen appliance or electronic device, follow the instructions, ensure they function properly and last longer.

✓ For example, when using a kitchen appliance or an electronic device, following the instructions ensures they function properly and last longer.

The sentence lacks articles 'a' before 'kitchen appliance' and 'an' before 'electronic device'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by changing 'follow' to 'following' and adding 'ensures' to agree with the subject.