Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., 'mushrooms' instead of 'machine'). Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because I often have many clothes to wash each week. It saves me a lot of time compared to washing by hand, and it's very convenient and affordable for my family.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and clearer linking. Avoid incomplete sentences and clarify your points with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: I think washing machines are more important because they can handle heavy clothes efficiently. On the other hand, sweeping can be done easily with a broom, so a sweeping machine is less necessary.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and by using more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Reading the instructions is essential when you buy a new appliance. For example, when I bought a washing machine, I read the manual carefully to understand how to operate it properly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammar errors and repetition. Try to use more precise language and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, reading instructions is crucial because it helps you understand the appliance better and prevents problems. For instance, I read the washing machine manual to avoid damaging my clothes.

× What I think washing machine is an essential machine that in my home because it it I often have many clothes in week so I can wash it by hands.

✓ What I think is that the washing machine is an essential machine in my home because I often have many clothes in a week so I cannot wash them by hand.

The sentence has singular and plural issues: 'washing machine' needs a definite article 'the' and 'clothes in week' should be 'clothes in a week'. Also, 'wash it by hands' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and 'hands' should be singular 'hand' or better 'by hand'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× So mushrooms is really convenient and it's quite affordable for my family.

✓ So the washing machine is really convenient and it's quite affordable for my family.

'Mushrooms' is incorrect here; it seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'machine'. The pronoun 'it' refers to the washing machine, so the noun should be consistent. Correcting to 'the washing machine' clarifies the meaning.

× Well I think washing machine is more important because washing machine is can do many tasks like wash heavy clothes, but I can sweep the floor by broom everyday without a sweat machine and.

✓ Well, I think the washing machine is more important because it can do many tasks like washing heavy clothes, but I can sweep the floor with a broom every day without a sweat machine.

The sentence has singular/plural and article issues: 'washing machine' needs 'the'; 'is can do' is incorrect, should be 'it can do'; 'wash heavy clothes' should be 'washing heavy clothes'; 'by broom' should be 'with a broom'; 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb); 'sweat machine' is unclear but kept as is assuming meaning.

× Yes, definitely. Umm, the instruction is really essential when you buy something or starting to use some some appliance.

✓ Yes, definitely. Umm, the instructions are really essential when you buy something or start to use some appliance.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because usually instructions come in plural. Also, 'starting' should be 'start' to match the verb form after 'or'. The article 'the' is correct before 'instructions'.

× If for example when I buy a washing machine, you must read the instruction to know how to operate that.

✓ For example, when I buy a washing machine, I must read the instructions to know how to operate it.

The sentence incorrectly switches from 'I' to 'you' which is inconsistent. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'That' should be replaced with 'it' to refer to the washing machine.

× Yes, definitely. Within instruction is a is crucial because it will help you understand more about the appliance and avoid the bad bad things.

✓ Yes, definitely. The instructions are crucial because they will help you understand more about the appliance and avoid bad things.

'Within instruction' is incorrect; it should be 'The instructions'. 'Is a is' is a typo and should be 'are'. 'Bad bad things' is redundant; 'bad things' suffices. 'They' is used to refer to 'instructions' (plural).

× For example, when I bought washing machine, I read the instruction to avoid damaging my clothes.

✓ For example, when I bought a washing machine, I read the instructions to avoid damaging my clothes.

The sentence is mostly correct but missing the article 'a' before 'washing machine' and 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as instructions are usually plural.