Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some redundancy and awkward phrasing. Try to be more concise and natural by avoiding repeated words and improving sentence flow. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves time and makes household chores more efficient.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by avoiding redundancy and using clearer linking words. Also, 'articles' is unclear here; use more precise vocabulary. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, washing and sweeping machines are essential nowadays because they save time and allow people to focus on other important tasks.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite long and contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually ask the salesman about the machine's features when buying it, and I always read the user manual afterwards to understand how to use it properly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating similar phrases. Try to vary your vocabulary slightly for better effect.

Ví dụ: Yes, reading the instructions is important because it helps us understand all the features and prevents damage to the machine.

× We have a lot of electronical appliances, appliances at my home, but the most favorite of one favorite one of mine is a washing machine as it enhances our productivity and lessens our time in households.

✓ We have a lot of electrical appliances at my home, but my favourite one is a washing machine as it enhances our productivity and reduces the time spent on household chores.

The word 'electronical' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'electrical'. Also, 'most favorite of one favorite one of mine' is redundant and awkward; it should be simplified to 'my favourite one'. 'Lessens our time in households' is unclear; 'reduces the time spent on household chores' is clearer and more natural.

× Nowadays as people are experiencing busy schedules, so yes these type of machines are very essential in household activities as it makes the work more efficient.

✓ Nowadays, as people are experiencing busy schedules, yes, these types of machines are very essential in household activities as they make the work more efficient.

The phrase 'these type of machines' should be 'these types of machines' to agree in number. Also, 'it makes the work' should be 'they make the work' because 'machines' is plural. The conjunction 'so' is unnecessary after 'Nowadays' and should be removed for better sentence flow.

× At the same time it saves a lot of time and individuals can work on other articles.

✓ At the same time, they save a lot of time and individuals can work on other tasks.

'It saves' should be 'they save' to agree with the plural subject 'machines'. Also, 'work on other articles' is incorrect; 'articles' is not appropriate here, 'tasks' or 'activities' is better.

× While purchasing a machine, I like to consult about the salesman regarding the as the features of that particular machine and after taking that I always read the user manuals given along with the machine as it helps me to get to know about the features of the machine at the same time how to use that?

✓ While purchasing a machine, I like to consult the salesman regarding the features of that particular machine, and after buying it, I always read the user manual given along with the machine as it helps me to understand the features of the machine and how to use it.

The phrase 'consult about the salesman' is incorrect; it should be 'consult the salesman'. 'Regarding the as the features' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'regarding the features'. 'After taking that' is awkward; 'after buying it' is better. 'User manuals' should be singular 'user manual' if referring to one machine. 'Helps me to get to know about' is wordy; 'helps me to understand' is clearer. 'How to use that?' should be 'how to use it' as a statement, not a question.

× Yes, it is very important to read the instructions given in the user manual before using any kind of machine because by reading out the instructions we get to know how to use every feature of the machine and it will reduce the risk of damage.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions given in the user manual before using any kind of machine because by reading the instructions we learn how to use every feature of the machine and it reduces the risk of damage.

The phrase 'reading out the instructions' is incorrect; 'reading the instructions' is appropriate. 'Get to know how to use' is better expressed as 'learn how to use'. 'It will reduce' should be 'it reduces' to maintain present tense consistency.