Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid minor grammatical errors such as "more easier" (should be "easier") and improve sentence variety. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. Moreover, it makes laundry easier and more convenient, especially after a busy week when we have many clothes to wash. Without it, washing by hand would be very tiring.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well, but there are grammatical mistakes such as "more easier" and "can be tired" (should be "can be tiring"). Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential in homes because they make chores easier and save time and energy. For instance, washing clothes by hand can be tiring and time-consuming; however, with a washing machine, people can multitask while it operates.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but somewhat unclear and repetitive. Improve clarity by restructuring sentences and avoid vague phrases like "so it can help us to know." Also, ensure subject-verb agreement ("machine" and "them").

Ví dụ: Absolutely. I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is important to understand how to operate and maintain it properly.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats the same idea twice. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, vary your vocabulary to make your response more engaging.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe reading instructions is crucial because it helps us operate machines correctly, which prevents mistakes and protects the equipment from damage.

× It makes doing laundry more easier and convenient, especially when we have many clothes to wash after a busy week.

✓ It makes doing laundry easier and more convenient, especially when we have many clothes to wash after a busy week.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with 'easier' is redundant. The correct form is 'easier and more convenient' to properly compare two qualities.

× I think washing machines and sweeping machines are vital part of homes because they help people make their laundry more easier and save a lot of time and energy.

✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are a vital part of homes because they help people make their laundry easier and save a lot of time and energy.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect for the same reason as above; 'easier' is already comparative and does not need 'more'. Also, 'vital part' needs an article 'a' before it because it is a singular countable noun.

× For example, washing clothes by hand can be tired and time consuming, but with a washing machine people can do tasks while the machine works.

✓ For example, washing clothes by hand can be tiring and time-consuming, but with a washing machine people can do tasks while the machine works.

The adjective 'tired' is incorrectly used to describe the action; the correct form is 'tiring' to indicate that the activity causes tiredness. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as a compound adjective before a noun or verb.

× I always read the instructions before using a particular machine because it is important to know what to do with this machine and how to take care of them so it can help us to know.

✓ I always read the instructions before using a particular machine because it is important to know what to do with this machine and how to take care of it so it can help us.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because it refers to plural, but 'machine' is singular. It should be 'it' to match the singular noun. Also, the phrase 'help us to know' is redundant; 'help us' suffices.

× This way we can we can avoid making mistakes and prevent damaging the equipment.

✓ This way we can avoid making mistakes and prevent damaging the equipment.

The phrase 'we can' is repeated unnecessarily, which is a redundancy error. Removing the repeated phrase improves sentence clarity and correctness.