Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid informal phrases like "you know?" and reduce redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and add more specific details about why the dishwasher is helpful.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves a lot of time and effort. Previously, I washed dishes by hand, which was tiring and time-consuming. However, since we bought the dishwasher, cleaning up after meals has become much easier and faster, allowing me to focus on other tasks.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and coherence. Avoid filler words like 'yeah' and repeated words. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific reasons why these machines are important.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and reduce physical effort. Moreover, in today's busy life, these machines help people maintain cleanliness efficiently, which would be difficult without modern technology.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more formal linking words and avoiding contractions like 'cause. Also, try to be more concise and specific about the benefits of reading instructions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because it ensures my safety. Previously, I neglected this, but now I realize that understanding the instructions helps me operate the machine correctly and avoid accidents.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question well but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer linking words. Also, explain what you mean by 'upgrade the machine' to avoid confusion.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because it helps users operate it properly and prevents accidents. Unfortunately, many people ignore the instructions, which leads to misuse and potential damage to the technology.

× Probably my favorite machine at my place is a dishwasher.

✓ Probably my favorite machine at my place is the dishwasher.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'dishwasher' because it refers to a specific machine known to both speaker and listener. This is an article error (ID 22) related to singular and plural usage.

× In the past I used to wash all of the dishes by my own with my hands, but as I moved, my family bought a dishwasher and it made our life much easier.

✓ In the past I used to wash all of the dishes by myself with my hands, but when I moved, my family bought a dishwasher and it made our life much easier.

The phrase 'by my own' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'by myself' (ID 15). Also, 'as I moved' is better expressed as 'when I moved' for clarity and correctness.

× And now all the dishes are washed by the machine and it really helps, you know?

✓ And now all the dishes are washed by the machine, and it really helps, you know?

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses properly (ID 26 - sentence structure errors). The pronoun usage is correct here.

× Yes, I definitely do think so 'cause nowadays more and more people are getting used to work and use the machines only and the the life without the machines and any technologies would be much harder.

✓ Yes, I definitely do think so because nowadays more and more people are getting used to working and using machines only, and life without machines and any technologies would be much harder.

The informal contraction 'cause' should be replaced with 'because' for formal correctness (ID 16). Also, 'getting used to work and use' should be 'getting used to working and using' because after 'used to' the verb should be in -ing form (ID 8). The repeated 'the the' is a typo and should be corrected. The phrase 'the life' should be 'life' without 'the' (ID 22).

× Yes, of course I do read all the instructions before using any machine since it's about our safety and in the past I didn't do that.

✓ Yes, of course I read all the instructions before using any machine since it's about our safety, and in the past I didn't do that.

The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary in affirmative present tense statements and should be omitted (ID 6). The sentence flows better without it.

× But now I understand all the responsibility and the significance of the instruction 'cause it just lets you understand how to use any machine.

✓ But now I understand all the responsibility and the significance of the instructions because they just let you understand how to use any machine.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines (ID 1). Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formality (ID 16). The verb 'lets' should be 'let' to agree with plural subject 'instructions' (ID 27).

× Yes, of course it's significant to read all the instructions before using the machine.

✓ Yes, of course it's important to read all the instructions before using the machine.

The adjective 'significant' is not appropriate here; 'important' is the correct adjective to express necessity (ID 13).

× It helps to upgrade the machine correctly and avoid accidents.

✓ It helps to operate the machine correctly and avoid accidents.

The verb 'upgrade' is incorrect in this context; 'operate' is the correct verb when referring to using a machine (ID 11).

× However, not many people understand the full significance of the instructions and they just ignore it.

✓ However, not many people understand the full significance of the instructions and they just ignore them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because 'instructions' is plural; the correct pronoun is 'them' (ID 12).

× In the result, they don't understand how to use the technology.

✓ As a result, they don't understand how to use the technology.

The phrase 'In the result' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'As a result' to indicate consequence (ID 11).