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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Thí sinh

Yeah, it's my coffee machine for sure. It can kick start my day every morning and without it I would totally like a zombie and can not work efficiently. So it's a effective machine.

Giám khảo

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. You know, when people doing laughter and sweeping the floor by hands, Oh my God, no thanks. It's important machines that helps us save time and focus on other things. So it's a important invention for people.

Giám khảo

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Thí sinh

Oh not really. I think it depends on if the machine is easy to do. I just swing it. But if the machines are complex I will play safe and read the menu. That's all.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely, because if you just swing it and don't read the instructions, maybe you will mess things up and can get nothing done. So reading the manual Kim helps you avoid silly mistakes.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý nghĩa, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "a effective machine" nên là "an effective machine". Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại như "totally like a zombie" và có thể mở rộng thêm chi tiết để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is definitely my coffee machine. It helps me kick start my day every morning by brewing fresh coffee. Without it, I would feel very tired and unable to work efficiently. Therefore, it's an essential and effective machine for me.

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "people doing laughter" không đúng ngữ pháp và không rõ nghĩa. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi như "a important" thay vì "an important".

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. When people have to wash clothes and sweep floors by hand, it can be very tiring and time-consuming. Therefore, washing machines and sweeping machines are important inventions that help us save time and focus on other tasks.

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số từ không phù hợp như "swing it" và "read the menu". Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn như "try it" hoặc "read the manual". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm để rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn.

Ví dụ: Not really. It depends on how easy the machine is to use. If it's simple, I usually just try it out. However, if the machine is complex, I prefer to read the instructions carefully to avoid mistakes.

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ chính xác hơn thay vì "swing it" và "reading the manual Kim" (có thể là lỗi đánh máy). Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để thể hiện sự tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, absolutely. If you just try to use a machine without reading the instructions, you might make mistakes and fail to use it properly. Therefore, reading the manual helps you avoid such errors and use the machine effectively.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× So it's a effective machine.

So it's an effective machine.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'effective'. This is a common article usage rule in English.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× when people doing laughter and sweeping the floor by hands, Oh my God, no thanks.

when people are laughing and sweeping the floor by hand, Oh my God, no thanks.

The verb 'doing laughter' is incorrect; the correct form is 'are laughing' to indicate the present continuous tense. Also, 'by hands' should be 'by hand' as the idiomatic expression uses singular 'hand'.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× It's important machines that helps us save time and focus on other things.

They're important machines that help us save time and focus on other things.

'Machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Also, 'It's' (it is) should be 'They're' (they are) to agree with the plural subject.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× So it's a important invention for people.

So it's an important invention for people.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'important'.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I just swing it.

I just swing it.

No correction needed here; 'I just swing it' is grammatically correct in present tense.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× if the machines are complex I will play safe and read the menu.

if the machines are complex, I will play safe and read the manual.

Added a comma after the conditional clause for clarity. Also, 'menu' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'manual' when referring to instructions for machines.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So reading the manual Kim helps you avoid silly mistakes.

So reading the manual helps you avoid silly mistakes.

The word 'Kim' appears to be a typo or misplaced word and should be removed for the sentence to make sense.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
SafeSecure; Unharmed; Cautious; Harmless
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