Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Thí sinh
I think my favorite machine in my home is is the Music Maker because when summer is coming, the Today become hotter and hotter and I can use the milkshake to make some milkshake and.
Giám khảo
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Thí sinh
I think washing machine is quite important because most of us don't have enough time to wash clothes on our own, so washing machine is quite convenient and save our much more time, but the sweeping machine doesn't.
Giám khảo
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Thí sinh
Certainly I will read the instructions carefully before using the machine. For example the blender I mentioned before. The blender is quite dangerous before when you when you use it. If you don't read the instructions carefully, you may like install the knife.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's quite important to read the instructions. I think reading the instruction is the most is the simplest way to know the functions of the machine. Compared to using it in our daily life.
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误,内容表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,明确表达机器的名称和用途。
Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the blender because it helps me make refreshing milkshakes during the hot summer.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,表达不够准确。建议使用连贯的句子,明确比较洗衣机和扫地机器人的重要性,并注意时态和单复数。
Ví dụ: I think washing machines are very important because they save us a lot of time. However, sweeping machines are less essential in my opinion.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误,句子不连贯。建议使用完整句子,清晰表达危险性和阅读说明的重要性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine. For example, the blender can be dangerous if not used properly, so reading the manual helps me use it safely.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚,但有重复和不完整的句子。建议简洁明了地说明阅读说明书的重要性,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it helps me understand how to use the machine properly and avoid mistakes.
× the Today become hotter and hotter
✓ the days become hotter and hotter
这里的'today'是单数,且不适合用作复数表达天气变化,应使用'days'表示多天的变化。
× I can use the milkshake to make some milkshake
✓ I can use the machine to make some milkshake
这里'milkshake'是饮料名,不是机器,应使用'machine'指代设备。
× washing machine is quite important
✓ washing machines are quite important
此处指的是一般意义上的洗衣机,需用复数形式'washing machines',且谓语动词需与主语一致。
× save our much more time
✓ save us much more time
动词'save'后应接宾语,这里应为' us '而非'our',且'much more time'表达正确。
× The blender is quite dangerous before when you when you use it.
✓ The blender was quite dangerous before when you used it.
描述过去的情况,动词时态应为过去时,'is'改为'was','use'改为'used'。
× you may like install the knife.
✓ you may accidentally install the knife incorrectly.
原句表达不清,'like'用法错误,应改为'ad accidentally'或类似表达,且补充完整句意。
× reading the instruction is the most is the simplest way
✓ reading the instructions is the simplest way
instruction应为复数形式'instructions',且去掉多余的'is the most'。