Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách diễn đạt chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool during the hot summer in Vietnam. It makes the indoor environment comfortable and improves my productivity.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Câu trả lời cần có câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể hơn, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save time for busy people. Since many of us have hectic work schedules, these machines help us complete household chores more efficiently.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Đồng thời, bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how it works and prevents mistakes.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng đúng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác và thiếu mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important because some machines can be dangerous if used incorrectly. Learning how to use them properly helps keep me safe.

× Actually, in my home there are many devices which are extremely useful for me to deal with.

✓ Actually, in my home, there are many devices which are extremely useful for me to use.

The phrase 'useful for me to deal with' is awkward and unclear. The verb 'deal with' is not appropriate here; 'use' is more suitable to express the intended meaning. Also, a comma after 'home' improves readability.

× My house works.

✓ My housework.

The phrase 'My house works' is incorrect and does not make sense. The intended meaning is likely 'My housework,' referring to tasks done at home.

× But to be honest, I like to say that I really love the air conditioner because it's summer in Vietnam and the weather is extremely hot.

✓ But to be honest, I want to say that I really love the air conditioner because it's summer in Vietnam and the weather is extremely hot.

The phrase 'I like to say' is not appropriate here; 'I want to say' better expresses the speaker's intention. Also, 'But' at the beginning is acceptable but could be omitted for smoother flow.

× Yes, I think they are bought extremely necessary for people nowadays because we are quite busy with our casual at work.

✓ Yes, I think they are extremely necessary for people nowadays because we are quite busy with our casual work.

The phrase 'bought extremely necessary' is incorrect; 'bought' should be removed. Also, 'casual at work' is unclear; 'casual work' or 'daily work' is more appropriate.

× So if there are some things that have to do with home housework easily, I think that they are important.

✓ So if there are some things that can help with housework easily, I think that they are important.

The phrase 'have to do with home housework easily' is awkward and unclear. Replacing it with 'can help with housework easily' clarifies the meaning.

× I definitely guessed I like to to get to know about how about this machine functions, so reading the guy reading the guiding books is the only way to help me to do with it.

✓ I definitely like to get to know how this machine functions, so reading the guidebook is the only way to help me use it.

The phrase 'I definitely guessed I like to to get to know about how about this machine functions' is confusing and contains repetition. 'Guidebook' is the correct term instead of 'guy reading the guiding books.' Also, 'help me to do with it' should be 'help me use it.'

× Yes, of course reading the instructions is quite important because some machine is easy to make you heard, so learn how to use it absolutely is the best way to save yourself.

✓ Yes, of course reading the instructions is quite important because some machines can easily cause harm, so learning how to use them is absolutely the best way to protect yourself.

The phrase 'some machine is easy to make you heard' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'some machines can easily cause harm.' Also, 'save yourself' is better expressed as 'protect yourself.' The pronouns and verb forms are corrected accordingly.