Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Thí sinh
My favorite machine in my home is washing machine. It help me clean the clothes easily and I don't have to do much homework.
Giám khảo
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think they are important because it saves people's time and it clean more cure than people clean.
Giám khảo
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Thí sinh
Yes, I read instructions because instructions tell me how to use a machine efficiently. Besides, I will not hurt a machine after reading a instructions.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Thí sinh
Yes, reading instructions help people learn more about the machine and people will not damage the machine and use the machine more efficiently.
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“help”应为“helps”,且“homework”用词不当,应为“housework”。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确性,同时回答可以更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean clothes easily, saving me a lot of time and effort with household chores.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“it clean”应为“they clean”,且“more cure”用词不当,表达不清晰。建议注意主谓一致和词汇准确性,使用更合适的表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save people's time and clean more thoroughly than manual cleaning.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有冠词错误,如“a instructions”应为“the instructions”,且表达稍显重复。建议注意冠词使用和句子简洁性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions because they explain how to use the machine efficiently and help me avoid damaging it.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中“reading instructions help”应为“helps”,且句子结构较简单,建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because it helps people understand the machine better, preventing damage and ensuring efficient use.
× My favorite machine in my home is washing machine.
✓ My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine.
在英语中,单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。这里的“washing machine”是特指家里的洗衣机,所以需要加定冠词“the”。
× It help me clean the clothes easily and I don't have to do much homework.
✓ It helps me clean the clothes easily and I don't have to do much homework.
主语是单数第三人称“it”,谓语动词应加-s,变为“helps”。
× Yes, I think they are important because it saves people's time and it clean more cure than people clean.
✓ Yes, I think they are important because they save people's time and they clean more thoroughly than people do.
主语“they”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“save”和“clean”。另外,“cure”用词错误,应为“thoroughly”表示“更彻底地”。
× Yes, I read instructions because instructions tell me how to use a machine efficiently.
✓ Yes, I read the instructions because the instructions tell me how to use a machine efficiently.
复数可数名词“instructions”前需要加定冠词“the”,表示特指说明书。
× Besides, I will not hurt a machine after reading a instructions.
✓ Besides, I will not hurt a machine after reading the instructions.
“instructions”是复数名词,前面不能用不定冠词“a”,应使用定冠词“the”。
× Yes, reading instructions help people learn more about the machine and people will not damage the machine and use the machine more efficiently.
✓ Yes, reading instructions helps people learn more about the machine, and people will not damage the machine and will use the machine more efficiently.
主语“reading instructions”是单数,谓语动词应加-s,变为“helps”。另外,后半句中“people will not damage... and will use...”需要保持并列结构,两个谓语动词都应带“will”。