Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复，影响了表达的自然流畅。建议注意语法正确性，避免重复，并使用更丰富的词汇来描述机器的优点。

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort by quickly cleaning clothes, especially after a long day. I find washing clothes by hand very tiring, so this machine is very helpful.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，且部分内容与问题关联不强。建议回答时紧扣问题，避免无关内容，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in my home because they save a lot of time and effort. Moreover, they help reduce conflicts at home since everyone can share the housework more easily.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且句子结构混乱。建议练习正确使用时态和动词形式，表达时更简洁明了。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, but I prefer watching a video tutorial because it is easier to understand. I like simple instructions since I don't want to spend too much time reading.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，且例子表达不够清晰。建议注意语法正确性，使用更具体的例子来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because they help ensure safe and correct operation. For example, once I didn't read the instructions carefully, and the machine didn't work properly, which caused me a lot of stress.

× It saves me a lot of time and effort be by quickly cleaning clothes, especially after a long day.

✓ It saves me a lot of time and effort by quickly cleaning clothes, especially after a long day.

这里的错误是多余的“be”导致句子结构不正确。正确用法是“by + 动词-ing形式”表示方式或方法。去掉“be”后，句子表达清晰且符合语法。

× I don't want to wash clothes by hand because it is it is too tired for me to do it.

✓ I don't want to wash clothes by hand because it is too tiring for me to do it.

这里“too tired”用错了，应该用形容词“tiring”来描述使人感到疲劳的动作。“tired”是描述人的状态，而“tiring”描述使人感到疲劳的事物或动作。

× I don't want to wash clothes or sweats at the store every day.

✓ I don't want to wash clothes or sweep every day.

“sweats”是名词，指运动裤，不符合语境。这里应使用动词“sweep”表示“扫地”，与“wash clothes”并列。

× Especially I don't want to fight with my little brother just because who will do the housework.

✓ Especially, I don't want to fight with my little brother just because of who will do the housework.

“because who will do the housework”缺少介词“of”，正确表达是“because of who will do the housework”，表示“因为谁来做家务”。

× Maybe yes, I will rather instructions before using a machine, but I prefer to watching a video about how to control it.

✓ Maybe yes, I will read instructions before using a machine, but I prefer watching a video about how to control it.

“will rather instructions”结构错误，应为“will read instructions”。“prefer to watching”应改为“prefer watching”，因为“prefer”后接动名词时不加“to”。

× I really I really love the simple instructions because I don't want to read more about it.

✓ I really love the simple instructions because I don't want to read more about it.

句中“I really”重复，应去掉多余部分，使句子简洁通顺。

× Yes, definitely it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because they help ensure safe and creates operations.

✓ Yes, definitely it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because they help ensure safe and correct operations.

“creates operations”用词错误，应为“correct operations”，表示“正确的操作”。

× For example, want one time I didn't read the instructions carefully and it cost me a lot of stress when the machine didn't work.

✓ For example, one time I didn't read the instructions carefully and it caused me a lot of stress when the machine didn't work.

“want one time”应为“one time”，“cost me a lot of stress”时态和用词不当，改为“caused me a lot of stress”更符合过去时态和表达习惯。