Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且句子较长且有重复。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time. I don't like washing clothes by hand, so this machine helps me clean them quickly and efficiently.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“do the sweeping”和“very more cleaner”。建议使用正确的短语和形容词比较级，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they save us a lot of time. They help keep our clothes and home clean quickly and effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“choose some simple machine”和“avoid make the machines broken”。建议使用完整句子，注意动词形式和表达清晰。

Ví dụ: For simple machines, I usually don't read the instructions because they are easy to use. However, for complex machines, I always read the instructions to avoid damaging them and to use them properly.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误，如“make some damaging”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important. If we don't read them, we might make mistakes and damage the machines. Reading instructions helps us use machines correctly and avoid problems.

× I don't like wash the clothes by myself.

✓ I don't like washing the clothes by myself.

动词 'like' 后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里应使用 'washing' 而不是动词原形 'wash'。

× So the washing machine can help me solve this problem and just in a short time they can clean the clothes very well.

✓ So the washing machine can help me solve this problem and just in a short time it can clean the clothes very well.

主语是单数 'the washing machine'，后面代词应使用单数 'it'，而不是复数 'they'。

× They are so important because they help us save a lot of time doing the laundry or do the sweeping.

✓ They are so important because they help us save a lot of time doing the laundry or sweeping.

动词 'help' 后面接动词时，两个动作应保持形式一致。这里 'doing' 和 'do' 不一致，应改为 'doing' 或 'sweeping'。

× Just in a short time they can make our clothes at home very more cleaner and it's they are really helpful.

✓ Just in a short time they can make our clothes at home much cleaner and they are really helpful.

'more cleaner' 是错误的比较级表达，'cleaner' 已经是比较级，前面不应加 'more'。此外，'it's they are' 结构错误，应改为 'they are'。

× Well, choose some simple machine.

✓ Well, I choose some simple machines.

句子缺少主语，且 'machine' 应为复数 'machines'，以符合语境。

× But for some complex machines I have to read the instructions to avoid make the machines broken and I can use them more quickly.

✓ But for some complex machines I have to read the instructions to avoid making the machines broken and I can use them more quickly.

'avoid' 后应接动名词形式 'making'，而不是动词原形 'make'。

× ...we might make some mistakes and make some damaging to the machines.

✓ ...we might make some mistakes and cause some damage to the machines.

'damaging' 是形容词，不能用作名词，正确表达应为 'damage'，表示损害。