Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は主題に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「makes me to play」ではなく「allows me to play」が自然です。また、例の部分が未完成で、具体性に欠けています。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文法を正し、例を具体的に述べることをお勧めします。

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is my gaming monitor because it allows me to play games like Apex Legends smoothly. It makes me feel happy and fulfilled after a long day. For example, I recently played a challenging match that improved my skills and gave me a sense of achievement.

Gợi ý: 「sleeping machines」は「sweeping machines」の誤りと思われます。文法的な誤りや語順の問題があり、より自然な表現が必要です。さらに、接続詞を使って文の流れを滑らかにし、具体的な理由や効果を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I think sweeping machines are very important because they help keep the room clean easily and quickly. For example, I usually clean my room every Saturday, and using a sweeping machine saves me a lot of time compared to cleaning by hand. Therefore, I can spend more time relaxing or doing other important tasks.

Gợi ý: 文が断片的で不完全です。「using a machine. Is very easy to operate nowadays.」は文法的に誤りで、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然な文章構成と接続詞の使用を心がけ、具体的な例を明確に述べることが重要です。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't read the instructions because machines are very easy to operate nowadays. For example, many devices have simple touch buttons and touch screens, so I can figure out how to use them quickly without any help.

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不十分です。また、「So many people.」は意味が不明瞭で不自然です。回答は完全な文で構成し、理由や具体例を明確に述べることが必要です。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think it is important to read the instructions because many machines today are very user-friendly. For example, devices often have simple touch buttons and touch screens, which make them easy to use even for beginners.

× My favorite machine in my home is gaming monitor.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is a gaming monitor.

The noun 'gaming monitor' is singular and countable, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× This makes me to play game like Apex Legends.

✓ This makes me play games like Apex Legends.

After 'make' in causative form, the base form of the verb should be used without 'to'. Also, 'game' should be plural 'games' to match the context.

× It makes me feel happy and fulfill.

✓ It makes me feel happy and fulfilled.

The adjective 'fulfilled' is the correct form to describe a feeling, not 'fulfill' which is a verb.

× For example, I recently play a game in.

✓ For example, I recently played a game.

The sentence is incomplete and uses the wrong tense. 'Recently' indicates past action, so past tense 'played' is appropriate, and the phrase 'in' is unnecessary and incomplete.

× I think sleeping machines are very important because they help keep the room clean easy and quickly.

✓ I think sweeping machines are very important because they help keep the room clean easily and quickly.

The word 'sleeping' is incorrect; it should be 'sweeping' to refer to cleaning machines. Also, 'clean' should be modified by the adverb 'easily' instead of the adjective 'easy'.

× For example, I usually clean my room every Saturday and using sweeping machine saves me a lot of time compared to cleaning by hand.

✓ For example, I usually clean my room every Saturday, and using a sweeping machine saves me a lot of time compared to cleaning by hand.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate independent clauses. Also, 'using sweeping machine' requires the article 'a' before 'sweeping machine'.

× No, I don't need the instructions because using a machine.

✓ No, I don't need the instructions because using a machine is very easy.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb in the second clause. Adding 'is very easy' completes the thought.

× Is very easy to operate nowadays.

✓ It is very easy to operate nowadays.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'It' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× For example, many devices have simple touch button and touch screens, so I can figure out how to use them quickly.

✓ For example, many devices have simple touch buttons and touch screens, so I can figure out how to use them quickly.

The noun 'button' should be plural 'buttons' to agree with 'many devices' and 'touch screens'.