Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more grammatically correct and concise. Avoid redundancy and ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to provide specific reasons why the washing machine is your favourite.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it makes washing clothes much easier and faster. It helps my mother save a lot of time and effort, especially since we have many clothes to wash daily. Therefore, I often use it to wash my own clothes as well.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'sweeping machines' instead of 'squeaking machines') and avoid repetition. Provide clear examples and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in today's technological era. Most households have these machines because they make daily chores easier and save a lot of time. For instance, using a washing machine reduces the effort needed to clean clothes by hand.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating phrases and finish your examples clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why reading instructions is important.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using any machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and effectively. For example, when I recently bought a new washing machine, reading the manual helped me avoid common mistakes and use all its features properly.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and is repetitive. Use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide clear reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe reading instructions is very important because it prevents problems and ensures the equipment is used correctly. For instance, by reading the manual, I can avoid damaging the machine and use it more efficiently.

× One of my favorite machine in my accommodation is washing machine as it makes it very convenient to wash clothes by on the daily basis.

✓ One of my favorite machines in my accommodation is the washing machine as it makes it very convenient to wash clothes on a daily basis.

The phrase 'one of my favorite machine' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'machine' should be 'machines'. Also, 'washing machine' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine. 'By on the daily basis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on a daily basis'.

× So I thought that it helps my mother in lot of ways as it reduce time of washing clothes by hands so I usually wash his clothes in that machine.

✓ So I thought that it helps my mother in a lot of ways as it reduces the time of washing clothes by hand, so I usually wash her clothes in that machine.

The phrase 'in lot of ways' should be 'in a lot of ways' to be grammatically correct. 'It reduce' should be 'it reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'By hands' should be 'by hand' as the phrase is idiomatic and singular. 'His clothes' is incorrect as the subject is the mother, so it should be 'her clothes'.

× According to me, I think so that washing machines and squeaking machines plays a crucial role in our life in cutting edge era.

✓ According to me, I think that washing machines and sweeping machines play a crucial role in our life in the cutting-edge era.

'Squeaking machines' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machines'. 'Plays' should be 'play' because the subject is plural ('washing machines and sweeping machines'). 'In cutting edge era' needs the definite article 'the' and a hyphen in 'cutting-edge' as it is a compound adjective.

× For example, we in the trend of technology every person have these documents at their place, so it makes their makes their work very easy and it is also less time consuming.

✓ For example, we are in the trend of technology; every person has these devices at their place, so it makes their work very easy and it is also less time-consuming.

'Every person have' should be 'every person has' because 'every person' is singular and requires singular verb 'has'. 'These documents' is likely incorrect; 'devices' or 'machines' fits better in context. 'Makes their makes their' is a repetition and should be corrected to 'makes their'. 'Less time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'less time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× Yes, it is very important to the read instructions printed on the machines before using it.

✓ Yes, it is very important to read the instructions printed on the machines before using them.

The phrase 'to the read' is incorrect; the article 'the' should be removed. Also, 'using it' is incorrect because 'machines' is plural, so it should be 'using them'.

× If we will not read all the instruction in the proper way, we have to face a lots of problems while using that equipment.

✓ If we do not read all the instructions properly, we will have to face a lot of problems while using that equipment.

'If we will not read' is incorrect; in conditional sentences, 'will' is not used in the 'if' clause. 'All the instruction' should be 'all the instructions' because 'instructions' is plural. 'In the proper way' is better expressed as 'properly'. 'A lots of problems' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of problems'.

× So I always prefer to read every, each and every instructions printed on it.

✓ So I always prefer to read every, each and every instruction printed on it.

'Instructions' should be singular 'instruction' after 'every' and 'each and every' because these quantifiers are followed by singular nouns.

× For example, recently I brought a new washing machine and I was I was.

✓ For example, recently I bought a new washing machine.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repetition 'I was I was'. It should be corrected to a complete sentence without repetition. Also, 'brought' is incorrect here; 'bought' is the correct past tense of 'buy'.

× Yes, I think so, because reading instruction plays an important role in the uses of equipment.

✓ Yes, I think so, because reading instructions plays an important role in the use of equipment.

'Reading instruction' should be 'reading instructions' as it is plural. 'Uses of equipment' should be 'use of equipment' because 'use' is uncountable here.

× As it will not read the instructions properly, we have to waste a lot of problems.

✓ If we do not read the instructions properly, we will face a lot of problems.

'As it will not read' is incorrect; the subject is missing and the conditional structure is wrong. It should be 'If we do not read'. 'We have to waste a lot of problems' is incorrect; 'waste' is not used with 'problems'. The correct phrase is 'face a lot of problems'.