Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 문장 구조가 단순하고 반복적인 표현이 있습니다. 좀 더 다양한 어휘를 사용하고, 문장 길이를 적절히 조절하여 풍부한 내용을 포함시키는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is my smartphone because it helps me stay connected with friends and access entertainment like YouTube videos throughout the day.

Gợi ý: 답변에 문법 오류와 어휘 선택의 부적절함이 있습니다. 또한, 'shipping machine'이라는 단어 사용이 부정확하며, 문장 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 정확한 단어 사용과 문장 연결어를 활용해 명확하고 논리적인 답변을 연습하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines are very important because they save time and effort. However, we don't have a vacuum cleaner at home, so we clean the floors manually.

Gợi ý: 문법 오류가 있고, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 현재 시제와 과거 시제를 올바르게 사용하고, 문장을 간결하고 자연스럽게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't read the instructions because I have used the machine before and already know how to operate it.

Gợi ý: 문법 오류와 반복적인 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 완성형으로 만들고, 더 다양한 이유를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because it helps us use the machine correctly and avoid damaging it.

× I can't live in one day without my smartphone.

✓ I can't live for one day without my smartphone.

The phrase 'live in one day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate duration. This is a preposition usage error, but since only errors in the provided list are to be corrected, and preposition errors are listed as ID 11, this correction is made here for clarity.

× I can watch YouTube and chat with my friends by smartphone.

✓ I can watch YouTube and chat with my friends on my smartphone.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used here; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to using a device. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Yes, I think washing machine is very important, but I don't think shipping machine is important because in my house we don't have shipping machine, but we have washing machine.

✓ Yes, I think the washing machine is very important, but I don't think the sweeping machine is important because in my house we don't have a sweeping machine, but we have a washing machine.

The nouns 'washing machine' and 'sweeping machine' need definite or indefinite articles to be grammatically correct. Also, 'shipping machine' is likely a typo for 'sweeping machine'. This is an article error (ID 22).

× So if we don't have machine machine, my mother or father or me or my sister have to do it by our hand.

✓ So if we don't have a machine, my mother or father or I or my sister have to do it by hand.

'Machine machine' is a repetition error; 'a machine' is correct. Also, 'me' should be 'I' as the subject of the verb. 'By our hand' should be 'by hand' as the idiomatic expression. The pronoun error is ID 12, article error is ID 22, and singular/plural issue is ID 1.

× So if we don't have machine machine, my mother or father or me or my sister have to do it by our hand.

✓ So if we don't have a machine, my mother or father or I or my sister have to do it by hand.

The pronoun 'me' is incorrectly used as a subject; it should be 'I'. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× No I don't read the instructions. I know I have to read it but I just using the machine before with the instructions.

✓ No, I don't read the instructions. I know I have to read them, but I just use the machine without the instructions before.

'Just using' is incorrect; it should be 'just use' to match the present tense. 'Before with the instructions' is awkward and incorrect; 'without the instructions before' is clearer. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'instructions' (plural). This involves verb tense (ID 6), pronoun (ID 12), and preposition (ID 11) errors.

× I know I have to read it but I just using the machine before with the instructions.

✓ I know I have to read it, but I just use the machine without the instructions before.

The modal verb 'have to' is used correctly, but the verb following 'just' should be in base form 'use' not 'using'. This is a modal verb usage error (ID 4) combined with verb form error (ID 8).

× I know I have to read it but I just using the machine before with the instructions.

✓ I know I have to read it, but I just use the machine without the instructions before.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'instructions' which is plural, so 'them' is more appropriate. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× Yes, I think it is important because if we don't read the instructions we can use it in the wrong way or maybe we can broke the machine.

✓ Yes, I think it is important because if we don't read the instructions, we can use it in the wrong way or maybe we can break the machine.

'Broke' is the past tense form, but here the base form 'break' is needed after 'can'. Also, a comma is needed after 'instructions' for clarity. This is a past tense issue (ID 5) and sentence structure issue (ID 26).

× ...or maybe we can broke the machine.

✓ ...or maybe we can break the machine.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the past tense. 'Broke' is past tense; 'break' is correct here.