Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题，例如“the air it makes me feel cool”应简化为“it makes me feel cool”。建议注意句子结构，避免重复和冗长，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps me stay cool and comfortable during the hot and humid summers, especially during heat waves. I can't imagine living without it.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“allowing us to do something”表达模糊，且“help my daily routine much efficient”语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，使内容更具体和连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Washing and sweeping machines save us a lot of time, so we can focus on more important tasks. For example, while the washing machine is running, I can study, prepare meals, or simply relax. These machines make my daily routine much more efficient.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，如“help us remind us”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. Reading the instructions helps me understand how to use the machine correctly. Sometimes, I might miss useful functions, but the instructions remind me of these features.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“how to use the how to use them safely”，且表达不够清晰。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because some machines can be dangerous. The instructions warn us how to use them safely, and since machines can be very different, reading instructions is really helpful.

× I think it's the air condition because it's really hot and humid in summer here and the air it makes me feel cool and comfortable especially during heat waves so I can't think living without it.

✓ I think it's the air conditioner because it's really hot and humid in summer here and the air it makes me feel cool and comfortable especially during heat waves so I can't imagine living without it.

“air condition”应为“air conditioner”，因为指的是空调这台机器，需用单数名词。

× Yes, definitely, because it can save us a lot of time, allowing us to do something, allowing us to focus on something more important.

✓ Yes, definitely, because they can save us a lot of time, allowing us to do something, allowing us to focus on something more important.

前文提到的是“washing machines and sweeping machines”，是复数，后文指代应使用复数代词“they”而非单数“it”。

× These machines help my daily routine much efficient I think.

✓ These machines help make my daily routine much more efficient, I think.

“much efficient”应为“much more efficient”，因为“efficient”是形容词，比较级需要“more”修饰。

× Yes, of course it.

✓ Yes, of course.

“Yes, of course it.”中“it”多余且不符合语法，应去掉。

× First of all it can help us know how to use the machine correctly and also sometimes we will ignore some useful functions and I think the instructions will help us remind us those new functions.

✓ First of all, it can help us know how to use the machine correctly, and also sometimes we ignore some useful functions. I think the instructions will help remind us of those new functions.

“help us remind us”重复使用“us”，应改为“help remind us”；“will ignore”时态不合适，改为一般现在时“ignore”。

× Yes, of course, because some machines may be very dangerous and the instructions can warn us how to use the how to use them safely and other machines may very different.

✓ Yes, of course, because some machines may be very dangerous and the instructions can warn us how to use them safely, and other machines may be very different.

“may very different”缺少系动词“be”，应为“may be very different”。

× I can't think living without it.

✓ I can't imagine living without it.

“can't think living”结构不正确，应使用“can't imagine living”表达无法想象没有它的生活。