Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Thí sinh
My favorite machine is the washing machine in my home because it can save time so a lot of time and effort and it can helps keep clothes clean.
Giám khảo
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Thí sinh
I think washing machine and sweeping machine are important because they can save a lot of time and effort compared to doing it by hand and it can keep things clean.
Giám khảo
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. I read instruction before using a machine because I want to make sure I make a right decision to use your machine and not breaking it.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think read the instruction is very important because you you can understand how how using it how using machine.
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复,如“save time so a lot of time”和“can helps”。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意动词形式的正确使用。
Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort, and it helps keep my clothes clean.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中缺少冠词,且句子结构较为简单,建议使用复数形式和适当的连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort compared to doing chores by hand, and they help keep the house clean.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如缺少冠词和动词形式错误,且表达不够自然。建议使用完整句子并注意语法准确。
Ví dụ: Absolutely. I always read the instructions before using a machine to make sure I use it correctly and avoid damaging it.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误,表达不清晰。建议简化句子,使用正确的语法结构,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important because it helps you understand how to use the machine properly.
× My favorite machine is the washing machine in my home because it can save time so a lot of time and effort and it can helps keep clothes clean.
✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine in my home because it can save a lot of time and effort and it can help keep clothes clean.
动词help在第三人称单数时不加s,因为前面已经有助动词can,助动词后面动词用原形。原句中helps是错误的。
× I think washing machine and sweeping machine are important because they can save a lot of time and effort compared to doing it by hand and it can keep things clean.
✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they can save a lot of time and effort compared to doing it by hand and they can keep things clean.
washing machine和sweeping machine应使用复数形式,因为指的是两种机器的总体。且后文代词it应改为they与复数主语保持一致。
× My favorite machine is the washing machine in my home because it can save time so a lot of time and effort and it can helps keep clothes clean.
✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine in my home because it can save a lot of time and effort and it can help keep clothes clean.
so a lot of time用法不正确,应直接用a lot of time表示大量时间。
× I think washing machine and sweeping machine are important because they can save a lot of time and effort compared to doing it by hand and it can keep things clean.
✓ I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they can save a lot of time and effort compared to doing it by hand and they can keep things clean.
it can keep things clean中的it应改为they,因为前面主语为复数machines。
× Absolutely. I read instruction before using a machine because I want to make sure I make a right decision to use your machine and not breaking it.
✓ Absolutely. I read the instructions before using a machine because I want to make sure I make the right decision to use your machine and not break it.
instruction前应加定冠词the,表示特定的说明书。a right decision应改为the right decision,表示特定的正确决定。not breaking it应改为not break it,保持动词原形。
× Yes, I think read the instruction is very important because you you can understand how how using it how using machine.
✓ Yes, I think reading the instructions is very important because you can understand how to use it and how to use the machine.
instruction应为复数形式instructions,且前面应加定冠词the。read应改为reading,作主语。how using it应改为how to use it,表达正确的用法。重复的you和how应删除。