Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to focus on one machine per answer to keep it clear and concise. Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort by cleaning my clothes quickly and efficiently.

Gợi ý: Make sure your sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words like 'because' or 'and' to connect your ideas logically. Avoid unclear phrases and check grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep the house clean and save us a lot of time and effort.

Gợi ý: Try to complete your sentences fully and avoid abrupt endings. Use proper verb tenses and plural forms. Also, be specific about when you read instructions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine to avoid mistakes that could damage it. I especially read them when I use a new device or need help.

Gợi ý: Complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons logically. Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: Yes, reading instructions is important because machines often have specific or unique settings that can be difficult to understand without guidance.

× My favorite machine in my home is the washing machine and the air conditioner because I feel very lazy to wash my clothes.

✓ My favorite machines in my home are the washing machine and the air conditioner because I feel very lazy to wash my clothes.

The subject refers to two machines, so the noun should be plural 'machines' and the verb should agree accordingly. Using singular 'machine' with two items is incorrect.

× So it is very helpful mission because it wash my clothes very quickly and so.

✓ So they are very helpful machines because they wash my clothes very quickly.

The pronouns and verbs should agree in number with the plural subject 'machines'. 'It' and 'wash' are singular forms and should be changed to 'they' and 'wash' respectively.

× Yes, of course, these machines are so important to a household because sweeping machines cleans the room properly and it takes our time.

✓ Yes, of course, these machines are very important to a household because sweeping machines clean the room properly and save our time.

'Sweeping machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'clean' not 'cleans'. Also, 'it takes our time' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'save our time' fits better in context.

× Also. On the other hand, washing machine wash our clothes very firstly which?

✓ Also, on the other hand, the washing machine washes our clothes very quickly.

The singular noun 'washing machine' requires the verb 'washes' with an 'es' ending for third person singular. 'Very firstly' is incorrect; 'very quickly' is the correct adverbial phrase.

× Yes, I always read those instructions before using a machine because if I made any mistakes the machine will be stuck or can be destroyed.

✓ Yes, I always read those instructions before using a machine because if I make any mistakes, the machine will get stuck or can be damaged.

The conditional clause requires present tense 'make' instead of past 'made' to express a real possibility. Also, 'will be stuck' is better expressed as 'will get stuck', and 'can be destroyed' is better as 'can be damaged' for clarity.

× So I read instruction whenever I need any help or if I.

✓ So I read instructions whenever I need any help or if I am unsure.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'am unsure' completes the thought logically.

× Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because if there is any specific function or settings or unique settings, people will find difficulty. So people.

✓ Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because if there are any specific or unique settings, people will find it difficult to use the machine.

The sentence has structural issues: 'function or settings or unique settings' is redundant and ungrammatical. 'There is' should be 'there are' for plural 'settings'. The phrase 'people will find difficulty' is incomplete; it should be 'people will find it difficult to use the machine'. The last fragment 'So people.' is incomplete and removed.