Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法有误，如"who don't want"应为"who doesn't want"，且表达略显重复和不够连贯。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because I don't like washing clothes by hand. Therefore, I often rely on it to save time and effort.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复表达，如"the sweeping and the sweeping machine"，且句子结构不够紧凑。建议避免重复，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Of course, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important nowadays because people are busy with work and have little time for household chores.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达，如"depends on if I can start a device"，且使用了过多的填充词"umm"。建议简化句子结构，减少口头语，使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: It depends. If I am familiar with the device, I usually skip the instructions. However, for complex or professional machines, I always read the instructions carefully.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I'm definitely yes"应为"Definitely, yes"，且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Definitely, yes. Reading instructions helps us understand how to use machines properly and also prevents damage or accidents.

× I know I've always been the kind of person who don't want to wash my clothes on my own, so at that time I often resort to the washing machine.

✓ I know I've always been the kind of person who doesn't want to wash my clothes on my own, so at that time I often resort to the washing machine.

这里的主语是单数的"person"，所以关系代词引导的从句谓语动词也应使用第三人称单数形式"doesn't"，而不是复数形式"don't"。主谓一致错误需要注意。

× You know, nowadays people are more busy with their lives, their works, so they barely can spare more time on these chores.

✓ You know, nowadays people are busier with their lives, their work, so they can barely spare more time on these chores.

"works"在这里应使用不可数名词"work"表示工作，"more busy"应改为比较级"busier"，"barely can"的语序应调整为"can barely"。

× So I think on the washing machine and the sweeping and the sweeping machine are important, at least in modern times.

✓ So I think the washing machine and the sweeping machine are important, at least in modern times.

这里重复使用了"the sweeping"和"the sweeping machine"，应去掉多余部分，且"on the washing machine"前的介词"on"不合适，应去掉。

× I would say it depends on if I can start a device that I'm familiar with, I'll just skip the instruction.

✓ I would say it depends on whether I can start a device that I'm familiar with; if so, I'll just skip the instructions.

"depends on if"结构不够正式，建议用"depends on whether"，并且句子结构应更清晰，分号连接两个相关句子更合适。

× However. Umm, if it's a more complex or professional machine, umm that I would read the instruction notes.

✓ However, if it's a more complex or professional machine, I would read the instruction notes.

句子中"However."后面不应断句，应用逗号连接；"umm that"多余，应去掉"that"。

× I'm definitely yes.

✓ I'm definitely sure.

"I'm definitely yes"结构不正确，"yes"不能作为形容词使用，正确表达应为"I'm definitely sure"或"My answer is definitely yes"。

× You know, reading the instructions not only help us or get to know how to use a machine, but also help us avoid some damages or hazards.

✓ You know, reading the instructions not only helps us get to know how to use a machine, but also helps us avoid some damage or hazards.

"help"应加第三人称单数形式"helps"，"or get to know"结构不正确，应去掉"or"，"damages"通常用不可数名词"damage"表示损害。