Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and adding linking words. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like the coffee machine with specific details.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine because I love coffee. It’s very convenient as I can quickly make a fresh cup whenever I need one, especially in the mornings.

Gợi ý: Improve coherence by using linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, be more specific about how these machines help in daily life.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort. For instance, they allow people to finish household chores quickly, so they can focus on other tasks or relax.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding redundancy and using linking words. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary.

Ví dụ: Of course, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how it works properly. This way, I can use it safely and avoid any mistakes.

Gợi ý: Use more natural expressions and avoid awkward phrases. Also, explain the consequences more clearly and logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it’s important to read the instructions because they show us how to operate the machine correctly. Otherwise, we might use it incorrectly, which could damage the machine or shorten its lifespan.

× Well, my favorite machine is coffee machine because I really like coffee.

✓ Well, my favorite machine is the coffee machine because I really like coffee.

The phrase 'coffee machine' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular machine being referred to. This is a common article usage issue related to singular nouns.

× Sometimes I need coffee.

✓ Sometimes I need coffee.

This sentence is grammatically correct; 'coffee' is an uncountable noun here, so no plural or article is needed.

× I easily make coffee at my home.

✓ I can easily make coffee at my home.

The original sentence lacks a modal verb to express ability or ease. Adding 'can' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes indeed, because it reduces the human work and human easily complete their other works.

✓ Yes indeed, because it reduces human work and humans can easily complete their other tasks.

'Human work' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Human' should be plural 'humans' to match 'their'. 'Works' is incorrect here; 'tasks' or 'work' is better. Also, a modal verb 'can' is needed before 'easily complete'.

× Also it is very convenient way to clean home.

✓ Also, it is a very convenient way to clean the home.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very convenient way' and 'the' before 'home' to specify the place. These are article and preposition usage issues.

× Course I read the all instructions before using a machine because it is very crucial for everyone to read these instructions and we remember all the functions of machines so that is why it is very easy to use the machine.

✓ Of course, I read all the instructions before using a machine because it is very crucial for everyone to read these instructions and remember all the functions of the machines, so that is why it is very easy to use the machine.

'Course' should be 'Of course'. 'The all instructions' is incorrect; correct order is 'all the instructions'. 'We remember' is better as just 'remember' to avoid redundancy. Added commas for clarity. Also, 'functions of machines' should be 'functions of the machines' for specificity.

× Yes indeed, because when we read all the instructions, we know how the machine work properly.

✓ Yes indeed, because when we read all the instructions, we know how the machine works properly.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'machine' is singular, so the verb should be 'works' not 'work'.

× If we do not read instructions, we are making mistakes and the machines will be destroyed or disappeared.

✓ If we do not read instructions, we make mistakes and the machines will be damaged or broken.

'Are making mistakes' is better as simple present 'make mistakes' for general truth. 'Destroyed or disappeared' is incorrect; machines do not 'disappear' in this context. 'Damaged' or 'broken' are appropriate verbs. Also, 'read instructions' is fine without 'the' here.