Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more structured and fluent by reducing hesitation and using clearer linking words. Also, be more specific about how the air cleaner helps you. For example, explain the effect of the air cleaner on the smell and your comfort.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the air cleaner in my room. When my neighbours have barbecues, the smell often drifts inside, which can be unpleasant. Therefore, I turn on the air cleaner to remove the odour and keep the air fresh and comfortable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by linking your ideas more smoothly and providing more specific reasons or examples about why these machines are important.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. Although I don't have them at home yet, I would like to try them because they can save a lot of time and effort when doing household chores.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why reading instructions is necessary.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine, especially if I need to install it myself. This helps me avoid mistakes and prevents damaging the machine.

Gợi ý: Try to organise your answer more clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your example and the benefits of reading instructions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading instructions is important. For instance, my air conditioner has a self-cleaning function that I was unaware of before. Because I didn't read the manual, I cleaned it myself, which took more time. If I had read the instructions, I could have saved a lot of effort.

× the smell flowed in my room and feeling everywhere

✓ the smell flowed into my room and was feeling everywhere

The verb 'feeling' is incorrectly used here; the past participle 'was feeling' is needed to describe the state caused by the smell. Also, 'in' should be 'into' to indicate movement towards the room.

× there isn't washing machine or sweeping machine

✓ there isn't a washing machine or a sweeping machine

When referring to singular countable nouns, the indefinite article 'a' is required after 'there isn't' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× some some machines you have to install it by yourself

✓ some machines you have to install yourself

The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here; also, 'install' should not be followed by 'it' when the object is already implied. The phrase 'by yourself' can be simplified to 'yourself'.

× some air conditioner has a function called self cleaning and I don't know it in the past and I clean the air conditioner by myself

✓ some air conditioners have a function called self-cleaning and I didn't know it in the past and I cleaned the air conditioner by myself

'Air conditioner' should be plural 'air conditioners' to match 'some'; 'has' should be 'have' for plural subject; 'self cleaning' should be hyphenated as 'self-cleaning'; 'don't know' should be past tense 'didn't know' to match 'in the past'; 'clean' should be past tense 'cleaned' to maintain tense consistency.