Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and energy. When I have many clothes to wash, it helps me finish the task quickly, so I can relax and do other things.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了表达不清和用词错误（如“other stars”），建议注意用词准确，避免模糊表达，同时补充具体细节使内容更丰富。

Ví dụ: Yes, washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because they save time and effort. After a long day, these machines help me clean my clothes and house quickly, making my life easier.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更清晰的句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用更恰当的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: It depends on the machine. For simple ones like the washing machine, I usually don't read the instructions. However, for new or complicated devices, I always read the manual to avoid damage.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误（如“extractions”应为“instructions”）和句子未完成，建议注意词汇准确性，完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions for new and complicated devices. They can be expensive and involve electricity, so improper use might be dangerous.

× I think my favorite machine at my home is a washing machine because it's pretty convenient and it could save me a lot of time and energy, especially when I have many things or tasks to do, it helps me a lot and it could save more time to do other thing.

✓ I think my favorite machine at my home is a washing machine because it's pretty convenient and it could save me a lot of time and energy, especially when I have many things or tasks to do. It helps me a lot and it could save more time to do other things.

句子中“other thing”应为复数形式“other things”，因为前文提到的是“many things or tasks”，表示多个事物，后面也应保持一致。

× I think my favorite machine at my home is a washing machine because it's pretty convenient and it could save me a lot of time and energy, especially when I have many things or tasks to do, it helps me a lot and it could save more time to do other thing.

✓ I think my favorite machine at my home is a washing machine because it's pretty convenient and it could save me a lot of time and energy, especially when I have many things or tasks to do. It helps me a lot and it could save more time to do other things.

“other thing”应改为“other things”，因为这里指的是多个其他的事情，名词需要用复数形式。

× Yes, I think these machines are totally important and could help me a lot in my daily life. Imagine after a long day, when you come back home, you still need to handle the clothes and the other stars, do some cleaning.

✓ Yes, I think these machines are totally important and could help me a lot in my daily life. Imagine after a long day, when you come back home, you still need to handle the clothes and the other chores, do some cleaning.

“the other stars”应为“the other chores”，这里应指“其他家务”，原文单词错误，需改正。

× So I didn't need to check the instruction, but it's a new headache one I definitely would to say it in case broken or other things.

✓ So I didn't need to check the instruction, but if it's a new, headache one, I definitely would say it in case it breaks or other problems occur.

原句中“would to say it”结构错误，应为“would say it”；“in case broken”缺少主语和谓语，应补充完整为“in case it breaks”；句子结构不完整，需调整。

× It's totally important to read the extractions when it come to a new and complicated device because a device is so expensive and maybe related to the electricity, so sometimes if you disbehave it could be dangerous and.

✓ It's totally important to read the instructions when it comes to a new and complicated device because a device is so expensive and maybe related to electricity, so sometimes if you misuse it, it could be dangerous.

“extractions”应为“instructions”；“when it come to”应为“when it comes to”，主谓一致；“related to the electricity”中“the”不需要；“disbehave”用词错误，应为“misuse”；句子末尾不完整，需补充完整。