Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 내용이 명확하지 않습니다. 'reduce water'라는 표현은 부적절하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성할 필요가 있습니다. 또한, 연결어를 사용하여 이유를 명확히 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the air conditioner because it helps to cool the room during hot and humid weather, making the environment more comfortable.

Gợi ý: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적 오류가 심합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답변하고, 이유를 명확하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 'sweeping machine'과 'sleeping machine'의 혼동을 피하고 정확한 단어 사용에 주의해야 합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are important because they save time and make cleaning easier.

Gợi ý: 답변이 불명확하고 문장이 완성되지 않았습니다. 명확하고 자연스러운 문장으로 답변하며, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because some devices can be complicated to operate without guidance.

Gợi ý: 문법 오류가 많고 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 'complicated instruction'와 'appliance'의 사용이 부적절하며, 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, reading instructions is important because it helps us use complicated appliances like washing machines and vacuum cleaners correctly and safely.

× My favorite machine is air conditioner because these days the weather is very high temperature and very humidity than the AC can help us to reduce water and good temperature.

✓ My favorite machine is the air conditioner because these days the weather is very hot and very humid, so the AC can help us to reduce humidity and maintain a good temperature.

The phrase 'air conditioner' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine. 'High temperature' and 'very humidity' are incorrect collocations; 'very hot' and 'very humid' are correct. 'Than' is incorrectly used; 'so' is appropriate to show cause and effect. 'Reduce water' is incorrect; it should be 'reduce humidity'.

× Not really because we thought washing machine and the sleeping machine we can clear and the tortillas on ourselves.

✓ Not really because we think washing machines and sweeping machines can clean the dirt on ourselves.

'Washing machine' and 'sleeping machine' should be plural as 'washing machines' and 'sweeping machines' to match the context. 'Sleeping machine' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'sweeping machine'. 'Clear' is incorrect; 'clean' is the correct verb. 'The tortillas' is incorrect; likely intended 'the dirt'.

× Not really because we thought washing machine and the sleeping machine we can clear and the tortillas on ourselves.

✓ Not really because we think washing machines and sweeping machines can clean the dirt on ourselves.

The pronoun 'we' is used incorrectly in the original sentence; the sentence structure is confusing. The corrected sentence clarifies the subject and object for better understanding.

× Yes, of course I read the instructions before using the machine.

✓ Yes, of course I read the instructions before using the machine.

No correction needed; the present tense is appropriate here as the student is stating a habitual action.

× It's very close to use something to COM, something complicated like Yeah.

✓ It is very close to using something complicated, like...

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction attempts to make it clearer, but the original meaning is ambiguous. Possibly the student meant 'It is difficult to use something complicated.'

× Yes, it can help us to use easily The complicated instruction and appliance is very complicated to use like sweeping machine and the washing machine.

✓ Yes, it can help us to use appliances easily. The instructions are very complicated to use, like for the sweeping machine and the washing machine.

The original sentence has pronoun and article misuse. 'The complicated instruction and appliance is very complicated' is awkward; separating into two sentences clarifies meaning. 'Use easily' is better as 'use appliances easily'.