Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it automatically cleans my clothes efficiently and saves me a lot of time.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác hoặc không rõ nghĩa như 'purple a few'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they make household chores easier and save a lot of time.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ thừa như 'uh' và chú ý đến ngữ pháp như số nhiều của 'instruction'. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually read the instructions before using a machine. For example, when I buy a coffee maker, I carefully follow the instructions to make sure I use it correctly.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading instructions is very important because they provide information on how to use a product correctly and help prevent damage or accidents.

× I really favorite machine in my home is a clever idea.

✓ My favorite machine in my home is a clever idea.

The word 'favorite' is an adjective and needs a possessive determiner like 'my' before it to be grammatically correct. Also, 'I really favorite machine' is incorrect word order. The correct phrase is 'My favorite machine'.

× This can perform touch automatically and this process more efficient and precise.

✓ It can perform tasks automatically, and this process is more efficient and precise.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. 'Perform touch' is unclear; 'perform tasks' is more appropriate. Also, 'this process more efficient' lacks the verb 'is'.

× Such as washing machine can easier clean, clean my clothes easier and save my time.

✓ For example, a washing machine can clean my clothes more easily and save my time.

The adverb 'easier' should be 'more easily' to modify the verb 'clean'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; adding 'For example' and rephrasing improves clarity.

× I think depend on purple a few you can do washing clothes and sweeping your house but if have washing machine and sweeping machine umm task will more easier and save your time.

✓ I think it depends on a few things; you can wash clothes and sweep your house manually, but if you have a washing machine and a sweeping machine, the tasks will be easier and save your time.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper subject-verb agreement and articles. 'Depend on purple a few' is unclear and likely a mishearing. Adding subjects, verbs, and articles clarifies the meaning.

× I usually read the instructions before using machine uh, for example, uh, when I buy a coffee maker, I carefully follow the instruction to ensure I use it correctly.

✓ I usually read the instructions before using a machine. For example, when I buy a coffee maker, I carefully follow the instructions to ensure I use it correctly.

The noun 'machine' needs the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to the manual or guidelines.

× This help me.

✓ This helps me.

The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number.

× Yes, I believe through the instruction very important instruction provide actions to inform information on how to use a product and complete a task correctly which help prevent the damage and mistake an accident.

✓ Yes, I believe reading the instructions is very important because instructions provide information on how to use a product and complete a task correctly, which helps prevent damage, mistakes, and accidents.

The phrase 'through the instruction' is incorrect; 'reading the instructions' is appropriate. Also, the sentence lacked proper connectors and plural forms. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'which'.