Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making the sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'since my childhood' which is unclear here, you can say 'has saved me a lot of time over the years.' Also, mention the dryer option more clearly.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it has saved me a lot of time over the years. Moreover, it is very easy to use and convenient. It also has a dryer option, which helps us dry clothes quickly even during winter.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'especially' properly to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific about how these machines help.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households because they save a lot of time. Additionally, they help maintain proper hygiene and cleanliness, especially in large houses or offices.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and articles. Also, avoid contradictions like 'sometimes' and 'usually' in the same answer. Make your answer more natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because if I am unaware of the rules, it might get damaged or cause harm to me or my family.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite long and has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to be concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid using complex words like 'demerits' and 'merits' if you are not confident. Instead, say 'advantages and disadvantages'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine because they explain how to use it properly and inform us about its advantages and disadvantages.

× My favorite machine is washing machine in my home because it save a lot of time since my childhood and also it's very easy to use and very convenient.

✓ My favorite machine is the washing machine in my home because it saves a lot of time since my childhood and also it's very easy to use and very convenient.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'washing machine' and uses 'save' instead of 'saves'. 'Washing machine' is singular, so the verb should be 'saves' to agree with the subject. Also, 'the' is needed before 'washing machine' to specify the particular machine.

× Also it has a option for dryer by which we can dry our clothes even in winter.

✓ Also it has an option for a dryer by which we can dry our clothes even in winter.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before a word starting with a vowel sound ('option'), so it should be 'an option'. Also, 'dryer' should have an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, I believe that washing machine and sweeping machines are very important in modern household because it saves a lot of time and also manage proper hygiene and cleanliness in the laundry and the in and the house, especially in the large house or office.

✓ Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households because they save a lot of time and also manage proper hygiene and cleanliness in the laundry and in the house, especially in large houses or offices.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatches: 'washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to match 'sweeping machines'. 'Modern household' should be plural 'modern households'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural subjects. Also, 'manage' should be 'manage' as it is plural subject. The phrase 'the in and the house' is incorrect and corrected to 'in the house'. 'Large house or office' should be plural 'large houses or offices' for consistency.

× Yes, sometimes I read the instructions before use the machine because if I am not aware of that rules, it can be damaged or it can harmful for the entire family or me.

✓ Yes, sometimes I read the instructions before using the machine because if I am not aware of those rules, it can be damaged or it can be harmful for the entire family or me.

The phrase 'before use the machine' is incorrect; it should be 'before using the machine' (gerund form). 'That rules' should be 'those rules' as 'rules' is plural. 'It can harmful' is missing the verb 'be' and should be 'it can be harmful'.

× Yes, I think it's very important to read the instruction before it's used because it provides a great way to use it and provide a proper direction that how can it work and what is the purpose it of its use and its demerits and merits.

✓ Yes, I think it's very important to read the instructions before it is used because it provides a great way to use it and provides proper directions on how it works, what its purpose is, and its demerits and merits.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Before it's used' is correct but can be clearer as 'before it is used'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'that how can it work' is incorrect; it should be 'on how it works'. 'What is the purpose it of its use' is incorrect and corrected to 'what its purpose is'.