Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid repetition and focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why you like the washing machine.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it reduces my mother's workload and saves a lot of time. This extra time allows us to engage in other productive activities and develop new skills.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repeating the same points and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly to make your answer coherent. Provide specific examples or reasons to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe both washing and sweeping machines are essential in daily life because they save a lot of time and reduce stress, especially for mothers. Additionally, these machines allow us to focus on developing new skills or spending quality time with family.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and clearer expression. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about why reading instructions is important, such as preventing damage and saving money.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because they are expensive. Proper use prevents damage, which saves money on repairs. Therefore, reading instructions is very beneficial.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid vague phrases and explain specifically how reading instructions prevents harm to oneself and the environment.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read instructions carefully because not following them can cause harm to ourselves and damage the environment. Reading instructions helps us use resources wisely and stay safe.

× When is Leo? Mostly I like the machines washing machines.

✓ What is Leo? Mostly, I like the washing machines.

The sentence 'When is Leo?' is incorrect because 'When' is used for time-related questions, but here the question seems to be 'What is Leo?'. Also, 'the machines washing machines' is incorrect word order; it should be 'the washing machines'. The pronoun usage is incorrect and the sentence structure is confusing.

× Becauses it reduce the work of my mom and it saves too much time for doing another activity in which we can make more productive and more developed skills.

✓ Because it reduces the work of my mom and saves a lot of time for doing other activities in which we can be more productive and develop more skills.

The verb 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'too much time' is better expressed as 'a lot of time' in this context. 'Another activity' should be plural 'other activities' to match the meaning. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Becauses it reduce it helps to reduce time.

✓ Because it helps to reduce time.

The phrase 'it reduce it helps' is redundant and incorrect. The correct form is 'it helps to reduce time'. The pronoun 'it' is used unnecessarily twice.

× Oh yes, according to me both machines are very important in daily life becauses it helps to reduce time and it saves too much time and it also helps to reduce stress on our mothers or any made becauses these machines are made only four saves time and also helps to develop new skills.

✓ Oh yes, according to me both machines are very important in daily life because they help to reduce time and save a lot of time. They also help to reduce stress on our mothers or any maid because these machines are made only to save time and also help to develop new skills.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used for plural 'both machines'; it should be 'they'. 'Becauses' is misspelled and should be 'because'. 'Any made' should be 'any maid'. 'Four saves time' is incorrect and should be 'to save time'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun agreement and clarity.

× Oh yes, of course the instruction reading is necessary becaused these types of machines are very expensive.

✓ Oh yes, of course reading the instructions is necessary because these types of machines are very expensive.

'Instruction reading' is awkward; the correct phrase is 'reading the instructions'. 'Becaused' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence is corrected for natural phrasing and spelling.

× If we do not do a with proper uses it can be also get a damaged.

✓ If we do not use it properly, it can also get damaged.

The phrase 'do a with proper uses' is incorrect; it should be 'use it properly'. 'Can be also get a damaged' is incorrect; the correct form is 'can also get damaged'. Prepositions and verb forms are corrected for clarity.

× So in which we are. More money is required to correct the machines and it is always beneficial for reading instruction.

✓ So, in such cases, more money is required to repair the machines, and it is always beneficial to read the instructions.

The sentence 'So in which we are.' is incomplete and unclear. It is rephrased to 'So, in such cases,' for clarity. 'Correct the machines' is better expressed as 'repair the machines'. 'Beneficial for reading instruction' should be 'beneficial to read the instructions'. Sentence structure is improved for meaning and flow.

× Oh yes it is very important to read instructions becauses if we do not read instructions it can be a damage over self and also can damage the environment.

✓ Oh yes, it is very important to read instructions because if we do not read them, it can cause harm to ourselves and also damage the environment.

'Becauses' is misspelled; should be 'because'. 'It can be a damage over self' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it can cause harm to ourselves'. Pronouns are corrected for clarity and correctness.

× So reading instructions is very important for get useful resource.

✓ So reading instructions is very important to get useful resources.

'Important for get' is incorrect; the correct form is 'important to get'. 'Resource' should be plural 'resources' to match the context. Preposition and quantifier usage are corrected.

× So I think we should have to read the instructions carefully.

✓ So I think we should read the instructions carefully.

The phrase 'should have to' is redundant and incorrect here. 'Should' alone is sufficient to express obligation. The sentence is corrected for proper modal verb usage.