Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly state your favourite machine and explain why it is your favourite in a clear and simple way. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are coherent.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps my mother with laundry, reducing her workload and saving time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how these machines help in daily life.

Ví dụ: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they reduce the burden of household chores, making life more convenient and easier for everyone.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but the sentence structure needs improvement. Use complete sentences and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully before using a machine because it helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine properly.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but is difficult to understand due to grammar and sentence structure errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and logically using linking words and specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is important to read the instructions because if we do not, we might make mistakes that can damage the machine. Reading the manual helps us use the machine correctly and maintain it easily.

× There are special specified are favorite machines like swimming is suing machine.

✓ There are some special favorite machines like the washing machine.

The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words causing confusion. 'Swimming is suing machine' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'washing machine'. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs simplification for clarity.

× Washing machine which helped my mom in household works to lose the burden on her.

✓ The washing machine helps my mom with household work to reduce her burden.

The original sentence uses 'which helped' incorrectly and 'household works' should be 'household work'. Also, 'to lose the burden on her' is incorrect; 'to reduce her burden' is appropriate.

× Yeah, of course washing machine answering machines are important because it helps us in household works to lose the burden on other making life more convenient and easier.

✓ Yeah, of course washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help us with household work to reduce the burden on others, making life more convenient and easier.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly. 'Washing machine answering machines' is confusing; likely meant 'washing machines and sweeping machines'. 'It helps' should be 'they help' to agree with plural subject. 'Household works' should be 'household work'. 'Lose the burden on other' is incorrect; 'reduce the burden on others' is correct.

× Yeah, of course I instructions before using the machine. Carefully, because it helps us too. Use the machine without doing any mistakes.

✓ Yeah, of course I read instructions carefully before using the machine because it helps us use the machine without making any mistakes.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack verbs. 'I instructions' is incomplete; it should be 'I read instructions'. 'Carefully' should be connected to the verb. 'Helps us too. Use the machine' is incorrect; it should be 'helps us use the machine'.

× Yes, is important. It is important to read the instructions of the machine be called so we might do. And do some bad or do some mistakes that layer damages our machines. Instead of that we can read the manual. So it's easy to as to manage the machine.

✓ Yes, it is important. It is important to read the instructions of the machine because otherwise we might make mistakes that could damage our machines later. Instead, we can read the manual so it's easier to manage the machine.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Yes, is important' lacks subject. 'Instructions of the machine be called so we might do' is incorrect and unclear. 'Do some bad or do some mistakes that layer damages' is incorrect; should be 'make mistakes that could damage later'. The sentence structure needs to be corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.