Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, say: "My favourite machine at home is the air fryer because it cooks food quickly and healthily. It has helped me lose weight by reducing oil usage."

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the air fryer because it cooks food quickly and healthily. For instance, I prepare all my meals in it, which saves time and helps me maintain a healthy diet.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, avoid unclear phrases like 'George has become very easier.' For example, say: "Yes, washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time. Previously, people did these tasks manually, but now machines make the work easier and more convenient."

Ví dụ: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time. For example, earlier people washed clothes and cleaned floors manually, but now these machines help busy people manage household chores efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you read instructions, using linking words. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. For example: "Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and correctly."

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine. This helps me learn how to attach parts properly and use the machine safely. I also keep the manual for future reference.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example: "Yes, it is very important to read instructions because different versions of machines have different ways of use and attachment."

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it is essential to read the instructions before using any machine. This is because each model may have unique features and operating methods that users need to understand.

× The most favorite machine which are used regularly and this is one of my most favorite is the air fryer in which I prepared my all the means and because it takes less point that's why it's my favorite and it helped me in losing weight.

✓ The most favorite machine which is used regularly and this is one of my most favorite is the air fryer in which I prepare all my meals and because it takes less time that's why it's my favorite and it helps me in losing weight.

The subject 'machine' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'means' should be 'meals' and 'prepared' should be 'prepare' to match present tense. 'Point' should be 'time' to make sense. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, I think washing machines been sleeping machines already important as it has saved a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are already important as they have saved a lot of time.

The phrase 'been sleeping machines' is incorrect; it should be 'and sweeping machines'. Also, 'machines' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. 'It has' should be 'they have' to agree with plural subject.

× Before people used to do all the work manually bus.

✓ Before, people used to do all the work manually, but now...

The word 'bus' is a typo and should be 'but'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs continuation for clarity.

× Now as time passes people are busy with their jobs and live with their words so it has made the work more easier and convenient.

✓ Now, as time passes, people are busy with their jobs and lives, so it has made the work easier and more convenient.

The phrase 'live with their words' is incorrect; it should be 'lives'. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone is sufficient. Commas are added for clarity.

× George has become very easier.

✓ Work has become much easier.

'George' is incorrect and likely a mishearing of 'work'. 'Very easier' is incorrect; 'much easier' is the correct form.

× This is their favorite part.

✓ This is my favorite part.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect as the speaker is referring to themselves; 'my' is appropriate.

× Whenever I'm starting a new machine, I read all the instructions and the process of how to how to the attachments of all the attachments of the machine and I follow every rule which which is given in the manual and I keep it with me so that whenever I needed I.

✓ Whenever I start a new machine, I read all the instructions and the process of how to use all the attachments of the machine, and I follow every rule given in the manual. I keep it with me so that whenever I need it, I can refer to it.

The sentence has repetition and incomplete parts. 'I'm starting' should be 'I start' for habitual action. 'How to how to' is repeated and should be corrected. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper ending.

× I think it is very essential to read the only instruction before operating any machine, becauses every version has their own own different process of attachment an usage.

✓ I think it is very essential to read the instructions before operating any machine because every version has its own different process of attachment and usage.

'The only instruction' is incorrect; 'the instructions' is appropriate. 'Becauses' is a typo for 'because'. 'Their own own' is repetitive; 'its own' is correct for singular 'version'. 'An usage' should be 'and usage'.