Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like the washing machine using simple and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. I just need to add detergent, and it automatically washes and dries my clothes, which makes my chores much easier.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, be careful with word choice and pronunciation to avoid confusion (e.g., 'sweeping' instead of 'stripping').

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they reduce physical effort and save time. This allows people to relax or focus on other activities.

Gợi ý: Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Use complete sentences and correct grammar. Explain your reasons logically and avoid fragmented sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it is important to understand how to use it properly. If I use it incorrectly, the machine might get damaged.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more structured by starting with a clear topic sentence, then giving specific reasons with linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they provide proper knowledge about the product. This helps people avoid mistakes that could damage the machine, ensuring it works well.

× One of my favorite machine in my home as my washing machine becauses in that I don't need to.

✓ One of my favorite machines in my home is my washing machine because with it I don't need to.

The phrase 'One of my favorite machine' is incorrect because 'one of' requires a plural noun following it. Therefore, 'machine' should be pluralized to 'machines'. Also, 'as' is incorrectly used and should be replaced with 'is' to correctly link the subject and predicate.

× You put my energy and effort, it is automatic just I need to put the detergent and it is a wash my cloth and also drive my growth easily.

✓ You don't need to put in my energy and effort; it is automatic. I just need to put the detergent, and it washes my clothes and also dries my clothes easily.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and verb forms. 'You put my energy and effort' is unclear and should be 'You don't need to put in my energy and effort'. 'It is a wash my cloth' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'it washes my clothes'. 'Drive my growth' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'dry my clothes'.

× As far as I concerned, washing machines and stripping machines are important because they help in reducing the.

✓ As far as I am concerned, washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help in reducing the...

The phrase 'As far as I concerned' is missing the verb 'am' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'stripping machines' is likely a mispronunciation or typo for 'sweeping machines'.

× Physical. A food and time of the person.

✓ physical effort and time of the person.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Physical. A food and time' does not make sense. It should be 'physical effort and time' to convey the intended meaning.

× So that they can put their time to other things and they can relax.

✓ So that they can spend their time on other things and relax.

The phrase 'put their time to other things' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'spend their time on other things'. Also, 'and they can relax' can be simplified to 'and relax' for better flow.

× Yes, I always prefer Stew. Read the instructions before.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to read the instructions before using the machine.

'Prefer Stew. Read' is incorrect and likely a transcription error. The correct phrase is 'prefer to read'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to specify 'before using the machine'.

× Actually using a machine becauses it is very important to have the full knowledge about the product.

✓ Actually, I use a machine because it is very important to have full knowledge about the product.

'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence structure is awkward; adding 'I use' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'the full knowledge' should be 'full knowledge' without 'the'.

× If you put wrong thing then the machine would be. Begin to factive. And win.

✓ If you put the wrong thing, then the machine would begin to be defective and wince.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains errors. 'Begin to factive' is likely 'begin to be defective'. 'Win' is unclear but could be 'wince' or 'whine'. The sentence needs proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× It is very important and useful to read the instruction becauses it helps people to gain the proper knowledge of the product so they can avoid any mistakes that could be damaged it for example if you have full knowledge of the product you can work it.

✓ It is very important and useful to read the instructions because it helps people gain proper knowledge of the product so they can avoid any mistakes that could damage it. For example, if you have full knowledge of the product, you can use it properly.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. 'Could be damaged it' is incorrect; it should be 'could damage it'. The sentence is long and run-on; splitting into two sentences improves clarity. 'Work it' is vague and should be 'use it properly'.