Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复和不连贯的地方。建议练习使用完整且连贯的句子，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the air fryer because I love eating fried foods like potato chips and fried chicken. It makes cooking these foods easier and healthier.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议学习如何用完整句子表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. Washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help keep our homes clean and can last longer if we clean them regularly.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子断断续续。建议练习用完整句子表达原因，并注意词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: Of course. Whenever I buy a new machine, I always read the instructions first because I want to understand how to use it properly.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够连贯，句子结构简单且有重复。建议使用连词连接句子，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Absolutely yes. I think reading the instructions is essential for every machine because it tells you how to use it correctly and safely.

× Absolutely is air fryer because you know, I really. Love to eat some fire things like a potato, potato chips or fire chicken so I really love this machine.

✓ Absolutely, it is the air fryer because, you know, I really love to eat some fried things like potatoes, potato chips, or fried chicken, so I really love this machine.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配，导致表达不清晰。应补充主语“it is”，并调整句子顺序，使其符合英语表达习惯。

× Absolutely is air fryer because you know, I really. Love to eat some fire things like a potato, potato chips or fire chicken so I really love this machine.

✓ Absolutely, it is the air fryer because, you know, I really love to eat some fried things like potatoes, potato chips, or fried chicken, so I really love this machine.

单词“fire”用错，应为形容词“fried”表示“油炸的”。

× Absolutely is air fryer because you know, I really. Love to eat some fire things like a potato, potato chips or fire chicken so I really love this machine.

✓ Absolutely, it is the air fryer because, you know, I really love to eat some fried things like potatoes, potato chips, or fried chicken, so I really love this machine.

“a potato”应改为复数“potatoes”，因为这里指的是一般的油炸食品，使用复数更合适。

× Definitely yes. If you want to improve the machines lifetime you will wishing it and spying aids. Make it clean can. Decrease the number of. The soil.

✓ Definitely yes. If you want to improve the machine's lifetime, you should wash it and use cleaning aids. Keeping it clean can decrease the amount of dirt.

“will wishing it and spying aids”表达错误，应使用情态动词“should”加动词原形“wash”，并且“spying aids”应为“cleaning aids”。句子结构混乱，需调整。

× Definitely yes. If you want to improve the machines lifetime you will wishing it and spying aids. Make it clean can. Decrease the number of. The soil.

✓ Definitely yes. If you want to improve the machine's lifetime, you should wash it and use cleaning aids. Keeping it clean can decrease the amount of dirt.

“Make it clean can”中“make”用法不当，应改为“keeping it clean”，表示保持清洁。

× Definitely yes. If you want to improve the machines lifetime you will wishing it and spying aids. Make it clean can. Decrease the number of. The soil.

✓ Definitely yes. If you want to improve the machine's lifetime, you should wash it and use cleaning aids. Keeping it clean can decrease the amount of dirt.

“machines lifetime”应为单数所有格“machine's lifetime”，因为指的是单个机器的寿命。

× Of course. If I buy something. Knew I will read the. Guideline as first be 'cause amber feeds this machine have a new SKU. Which I do not know this queue, so I will read the instruction at first.

✓ Of course. If I buy something new, I will read the guidelines first because sometimes this machine has a new SKU which I do not know, so I will read the instructions first.

句子断裂且结构混乱，缺少连贯性。应合并句子，调整语序，使表达完整且通顺。

× Of course. If I buy something. Knew I will read the. Guideline as first be 'cause amber feeds this machine have a new SKU. Which I do not know this queue, so I will read the instruction at first.

✓ Of course. If I buy something new, I will read the guidelines first because sometimes this machine has a new SKU which I do not know, so I will read the instructions first.

“Knew”用错，应为“new”；“this queue”应为“this SKU”，且“which I do not know this queue”表达不当，需改为“which I do not know”。

× Of course. If I buy something. Knew I will read the. Guideline as first be 'cause amber feeds this machine have a new SKU. Which I do not know this queue, so I will read the instruction at first.

✓ Of course. If I buy something new, I will read the guidelines first because sometimes this machine has a new SKU which I do not know, so I will read the instructions first.

“guideline”应使用复数形式“guidelines”，因为通常说明书包含多条指导。

× Absolutely yes. I think. Read. The instruction is essential to every machine. It will tell you how to use this machine, like the air fryer in some machine if you do not read.

✓ Absolutely yes. I think reading the instructions is essential for every machine. They will tell you how to use the machine, like the air fryer. If you do not read them, you might not use it correctly.

“Read the instruction”应改为动名词短语“reading the instructions”；“instruction”应为复数“instructions”；代词使用不当，需用“they”指代“instructions”。