Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors, and it is a bit unclear. Try to use simple and correct sentences, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, you can say: "My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me wash clothes easily and quickly without much physical effort. It cleans clothes better than washing by hand, so I really like it."

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me wash clothes easily and quickly without much physical effort. It cleans clothes better than washing by hand, so I really like it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Please try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you can say: "Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save people's time and effort. Washing machines clean clothes efficiently, while sweeping machines help keep the floor clean."

Ví dụ: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they save people's time and effort. Washing machines clean clothes efficiently, while sweeping machines help keep the floor clean.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat understandable but has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use complete sentences and clearer expressions. For example: "It depends. When I use a machine for the first time, I read the instructions carefully. But if I have used it before, I usually don't read the instructions because I already know how to use it."

Ví dụ: It depends. When I use a machine for the first time, I read the instructions carefully. But if I have used it before, I usually don't read the instructions because I already know how to use it.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but repetitive and has grammar errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to improve coherence. For example: "Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions, especially for beginners. They explain how to use the machine properly and what mistakes to avoid, which helps prevent damage."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions, especially for beginners. They explain how to use the machine properly and what mistakes to avoid, which helps prevent damage.

× The favorite missing in my home is washing machine as it helps me to wash my clothes without any my physical work and it's easier and fast and makes the clothes clean than the physical 1 so I love the machine.

✓ The favorite machine in my home is the washing machine as it helps me wash my clothes without any physical work, and it's easier and faster and makes the clothes cleaner than doing it physically, so I love the machine.

The word 'missing' is incorrectly used instead of 'machine'. Also, 'any my physical work' is incorrect; it should be 'any physical work'. 'Easier and fast' should be 'easier and faster' to correctly use comparative adverbs. 'Makes the clothes clean' should be 'makes the clothes cleaner' to compare properly. The phrase 'than the physical 1' is unclear and corrected to 'than doing it physically'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× The favorite missing in my home is washing machine as it helps me to wash my clothes without any my physical work and it's easier and fast and makes the clothes clean than the physical 1 so I love the machine.

✓ The favorite machine in my home is the washing machine as it helps me wash my clothes without any physical work, and it's easier and faster and makes the clothes cleaner than doing it physically, so I love the machine.

The noun 'washing machine' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific machine in the home. Omitting 'the' before 'washing machine' is incorrect in this context.

× It wasn't missing.

✓ It wasn't missing.

This sentence is unclear and seems out of context. Possibly, the student meant 'It wasn't missing' but the meaning is ambiguous. No grammatical error in tense, but the sentence does not fit logically here.

× Yes. The boat was in missing answering missing are important as it both have its own. Or role as washing machine helped to clean the clothes an it. Predict the time of people answering machine also helps to clean the floor an area it's important.

✓ Yes. Both washing machines and sweeping machines are important as they each have their own role. The washing machine helps to clean clothes and saves people's time. The sweeping machine also helps to clean the floor and area, so they are important.

The original sentences are fragmented and contain nonsensical phrases like 'The boat was in missing answering missing' and 'Predict the time of people answering machine'. These are corrected to coherent sentences with proper subject-verb agreement and clear meaning.

× Yes. The boat was in missing answering missing are important as it both have its own. Or role as washing machine helped to clean the clothes an it. Predict the time of people answering machine also helps to clean the floor an area it's important.

✓ Yes. Both washing machines and sweeping machines are important as they each have their own role. The washing machine helps to clean clothes and saves people's time. The sweeping machine also helps to clean the floor and area, so they are important.

Incorrect use of conjunctions like 'Or' at the beginning of a sentence and improper linking of ideas caused confusion. Correct conjunctions and sentence connectors are used to improve flow and clarity.

× It depends, as when I'm using it for the first time I personally read the instruction an.

✓ It depends, as when I'm using it for the first time, I personally read the instructions.

The phrase 'read the instruction an' is incorrect; 'instructions' should be plural and no extra 'an' is needed. Also, a comma is added after 'time' for clarity.

× For the literal use, I don't use the instruction as a learning know the rules and how to use it.

✓ For regular use, I don't use the instructions as I already know the rules and how to use it.

'Literal use' is incorrect; 'regular use' is appropriate. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' when referring to guidelines. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, of course it's important to read the instruction for the beginner and for the first time using it as it's important as it shows how to use it an what should not be done to the machine an the instruction is very important.

✓ Yes, of course it's important to read the instructions for beginners and the first time using it, as it shows how to use it and what should not be done to the machine. The instructions are very important.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'For the beginner' should be 'for beginners'. 'An' is incorrectly used instead of 'and'. The sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.